I signed up 6 weeks ago, but finally started writing my first 2 Hubs last week. I could really use some honest feedback from you. I promise I can handle constructive criticism! (How else am I going to learn and grow?)
http://turtlewoman.hubpages.com/hub/Ben … ose-Weight
From a "future income potential" point of view, what do you think of this hub? I've tried to incorporate as much as I can from reading the Learning Center and Tutorials lately.
Thanks in advance!!
It is a very nice hub, and you have a good deal of targeted keywords and tags. Good length, structure, images, etc.. The only thing I noticed is that "It" in the title should be "They," since seeds are plural.
I thought the article was well written, concise and informative. Change to: "How do they help you lose weight?" (from how does it help...) Adding a recipe is always helpful to the reader.
Did you write a summary?
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