Request for critique on short story...

  1. NatalieSack profile image61
    NatalieSackposted 6 years ago

    This is the first draft of my new short story.  Any constructive feedback would be appreciated!

    1. spectacled-bear profile image83
      spectacled-bearposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I replied to this thread as a comment in your hub...