This is my first hub. Please review & let me know how can I make it better for readers.
http://shrikrishnap.hubpages.com/hub/Li … iful-1997#
Thanks in advance
Hi! First of all, your subject matter is very pleasant and you've expressed your thoughts wonderfully. However, you really need to work on your grammar, form and punctuation in some places. The overuse of elipsis (...) most notably. You want a period or comma in most of those situations. Elipsis are to be used to indicate missing information. I also saw "&" in the place of "and" at least once. Just some constructive criticism on how to make your hub more readable.
Otherwise, a great topic and very nice read. I look foward to seeing more!
Oops! Elipses. I need to work on my grammar too. :-)
Thanks for your reply Actually I wanted to write this hub as a poem, but the outcome was something else . But yes from now onward I will pay attention to Grammar & ask someone to proofread.
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