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    Ben Jenposted 6 years ago

    Well, I guess I'm one of those who wanted some help on how to create and present my hub interestingly. Let me know what else to add in there. Also, kindly let me know if my topic is too serious for everybody to read on? Please take a look at my hub with the title Truth on Florida Divorce Records.

    Looking forward for your feedback.

    1. arynix profile image60
      arynixposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I admire your courage in addressing a touchy subject! Just one comment: I don't get your "voice." It seems as if you're trying too hard to use fancy words and it comes across as a bit awkward.

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        Ben Jenposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Point taken Arynix. Thanks!

  2. Dame Scribe profile image59
    Dame Scribeposted 6 years ago

    You're allowed to post your Hub urls in this forum smile

    I read the Hub and had a hard time understanding some of the points. The first sentence should maybe start out with, Learning the truth about the reasons for a divorce ....

    Writing should introduce your topic, share information, tips or experience about the topic and end with some sort of resolution of the problem, if there is one tongue it will depend on your ability to answer 'what is the point?' and the other 5 W's and how. It is a good topic, good layout, not sure your photo should be at the bottom. There are little green arrows on the capsule for you to move them around. I would suggest maybe add some sort of humorous video about divorce to lighten up the experience of a heavy topic. Just some thoughts. smile

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      Ben Jenposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      hmm? now I know i can just post urls right here. Sounds like you just gave me some areas to focus on for amendment. Thanks a lot for your time Dame Scribe.

  3. Dame Scribe profile image59
    Dame Scribeposted 6 years ago

    Your welcome smile yes, you can post your article urls in this forum wink and you are off to a good start. We all started in the same boat too. You will gain confidence as you go along. You can always check other hubs too to check layouts.


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