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   Ritsosposted 13 years ago

   Hi all .. been here just under a week and just made my first pennies from adsense .. all 71p of it lol .. still, from reading others, that's not a bad start.
   
   Wondered if you would mind giving any feedback on the following three hubs I've done and see how I can improve.
   
   I've selected a variety .. one factual, one opinionated and 1 recipe which I'm doing a series of.
   
   thanks
   
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/Robert-Motherwe … nd-his-Art
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/Greek-Food-Briam
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/The-Death-of-th … onsumerism

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   Ritsosposted 13 years ago

   bump ... doesn't anyone want to check mine .. just one .. pretty please :-)

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   IzzyMposted 13 years ago

   I had a look at your Robert Motherwell hub.
   
   I would suggest you moved that photo down and leave space top right for an advert as that is the prime spot.
   
   Plus at 270 words or thereabouts the hub is a bit short. I think you should try to expand it to 500 words at least.

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   simeonvisserposted 13 years ago

   The same applies to your other hubs. You should never have a big photo as the first thing in your hub, you will want advertising to be there. Move the photo further down so the big advertisement from Google can be there.

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   Ritsosposted 13 years ago

   Thanks both .. Hadn't thought too much about the ad placements so that's not a bad idea ... can I change the layout retrospectively ? I'll have a look at some of them but will bear it in mind for future ones definitely.
   
   Did wonder about the amount of copy .. will probably leave some but bear that in mind and I will work on teh Robert Motherwell one as that is a genuine interest so I'll boost that one when I get a little time.
   
   thanks
   
   
   any more ?

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      IzzyMposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Just open the hub up and press edit. The layout can be changed or added to anytime. It is so easy in this platform with capsules to work with.
      
      You can press the preview button to see how the hub will look at any time and click save when you are happy with it.

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         Ritsosposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         cool .. will test that with some smaller posts and have a play .. cheers

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   Ritsosposted 13 years ago

   that better ?
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/The-Death-of-th … onsumerism
   
   Probably could be tidier but will have a play in the morning ta

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   IzzyMposted 13 years ago

   That's a lot better, but you might want to tidy up that white space at the bottom - to the left of the Amazon capsules. Just separate out the text a bit to stretch over it.
   Careful of white spaces - they look awful, but you got that main ad in a good position now

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