I'd like feedback on my article: "Glasses of glass" A man heart same a glass...

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  1. Asif Ali Ali profile image58
    Asif Ali Aliposted 5 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: "Glasses of glass" A man heart same a glass one time broken not connected other time. (must be signed in to view)

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    1. galleryofgrace profile image71
      galleryofgraceposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for sharing your dream.

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  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 years ago

    I couldn't make any sense out of this. If it is meant to be poetry I don't get it.

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  3. FatFreddysCat profile image93
    FatFreddysCatposted 5 years ago

    Complete and total jibba-jabba.

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    1. DrMark1961 profile image96
      DrMark1961posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I was going to be nice and suggest he takes come classes on English composition, but then thought "maybe he wants it that way?"
      Weird. If his name was not in the middle of the article I would think that it was scraped.

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  4. CMHypno profile image82
    CMHypnoposted 5 years ago

    I don't understand the title, so why would I be encouraged to read the article?  You need to work on your use of language - clear, concise, comprehensible

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    1. Asif Ali Ali profile image58
      Asif Ali Aliposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the concern on my articles.

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  5. Gregory DeVictor profile image94
    Gregory DeVictorposted 5 years ago

    In addition to everything that others have stated, the title of your article and text capsule titles must be in proper APA case. You can learn more about that here:

    https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … iting-Tips

    Finally, your paragraph is way too long. In order to retain the interest of a reader, paragraphs must be clear, complete, and “concise.” The dictionary definition of concise is “giving a lot of information clearly and in a few words; brief but comprehensive.”

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