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" Out "

Updated on June 22, 2013

One little word
I recommend you
to use
when you get done with me
"Out"
As simple as that
No excuses
No lies
No drama
wanna hear
Be a man
For once in your life
With b..a..lls enough
to spit it Out
I guarantee you
I won't shut my life down
If you are afraid that I may die
I won't either spend the rest of my life
on your memory recalling
I am strong enough
No gaps in my inner skin
to jigsaw me
No room for jealousy to bubble
Like acid on paint
in my heart.
If you go to an other,
Just go
life will be cool,
not that cruel
Flesh in flesh
is only what I need now
Not necessary fitting
Hand in hand
Or eyes to eyes
Legs wrap the back.
Just deep down go
Like a rocket ship
With high velocity
Breaking my atmospheric layer


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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Passionate work James.

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      It's a thin line between love and hate.

      Your poetry walks a mighty fine line, James. Great work!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Sir Wayne,

      Thanks for the visit and comment!

      Have a nice weekend!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      There's a bit of finality to it : )!!! So, you are writing from the perspective of the woman? Very interesting and when it's over, it's over, obviously!

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Angry passion, encapsulated quite well here James.

      All the best,

      Romeo's Quill

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      marcoujor ,

      Some girls dont believe in love because the reality guys become today.And that breeds hate instead.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      Thanks so much for the insight.

      Some girls dont like drama or any serious relationship with men.Just want that thing from men ,no money,no gifts .. just that thing to satisfy their basic animalistic desire.

      When I said :

      Like a rocket ship (that thing)

      With high velocity

      Breaking my atmospheric layer (hym..e..n)

      So the girl still v..i..r..g..in !she wants to be a woman!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Hmm, might better stick to the man's perspective. Women are very complicated and highly intelligent and men really have no idea of what is truly going on in their minds, especially concerning such! It is this type of thinking from men that will cause women to never return, men who treat women in such a manner and think such things.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Yeah,I agree with you.You know about your gender better than I do lol

      Yeah very complicated and very smart.When they want to get their own ways,they dont have to elbow people aside like men but they use only their charming to get a way :)

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      There you go again, judging women, when you seem to not really understand them. Maybe that's the reason why you are having a hard time finding one who will stay with you and you are always alone? Now I have a pretty good idea just from reading your words in your comments. "From out of the mouth, the heart speaks." So your words are very revealing as to the condition of your heart. More like : ( than : )

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      My feet in my mouth:)

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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      lol I liked your back and forth trades with Faith, but that got me off topic. Good poem James! I love reading your work.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      PoeticPhilosophy,

      Oh lol well I am not judgmental or Alexander pop.I am not saying all women are alike.There are some exceptions,but the majority share the same characteristics.

      Thanks for the visit!

      James

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