A Love Poem: I Love the Girl with Venom

This is a love poem written in four stanzas. Each stanza has seven lines. This love poem is not that big. There is no rhyme scheme in it. You can call it a prosaic verse. Read this romantic poem and enjoy it. If you like it then please let me know.

I love the girl with venom,

Acrid sulfur odor her breath emits

Spreads poisons her very presence;

I love that poisonous lash

With charming eyes of a black cobra;

Blood is green in her blue veins,

She has the bite of a snake.

I love the poisonous girl,

The girl who one day called Satan

To give her soul away,

To be her slave,

To bring darkness and death;

I shall call Satan oneday

To give mine away.

I love the girl who will destroy,

Will overshadow the sun;

With her black wings invisible

Her very soul will travel the world;

I shall give my soul wings,

It will fly high

With her to the bottom.

I am in love with the venomous lash,

Who can be here anytime

And lo! She vanished with a flash,

With scarcely any smoke;

My heart and soul would follow

Her to the sky and below the ocean

I love my lovely deadly lady.

This is my first endeavor to write a poem. I am not a poet and I have not any experience in this art. You may find it ridiculous or of low standard. Please advise me about my mistakes and pardon me if I heart the poet inside you.

I am waiting for your comments.