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A Sweeten That Hurts | Poem

Updated on April 6, 2014
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It was a pressure

That transited in a stream

Through a conveyor at its job

Reaching a goal for design

Whose burden arouses

And its notice spell pleasure

That cannot be denied

And worth most desire

Who can resist it power?

When it displays one’s wish

In a person of enjoyment

A delight to be ventured

A sensation as real as imagined

In its appearance even its fulfillment

When bliss, a name for its deed

In triggering to activeness

An embrace in joy to everyone

That can feel and imagine its value

Who can pin it to evil?

Only when it displays wickedly

Transporting another phase

Embedded in its interior

A program from its foundation

Encrypted for a foul

Its ends influence Vulgar

In all its sense as evil

Displaying an injure of all

That houses it for a pleasure

Now cornered for displeasure

Bringing pain and misery

To all at its disposer

A sweeten that hurts

Abba Elijah also known as elija_god (elijagod)


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    Abba Elijah aka elijagod 3 years ago from Abuja - Nigeria

    thanks for the comment DDE!

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    Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

    A Sweeten That Hurts is a lovely poem with such great emotion.

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    Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

    A great read and voted up.


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    Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

    Love sweets but I stick to chocolate pieces.

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    Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

    Sweets would be a pain for me, too, at the moment - I'm going to the dentist tomorrow. Some creative ideas in your poem.

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    Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

    Just like Eve, we eat the forbidden candy and wonder why? Clever and meaningful...

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    kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

    abbaelijah..ahh. but this is made with real sugar, artificial sweetners are not they are the uhealthiest of them all...the darker the chocolate the more desirable...nothing like a hand full of M&M's on a rainy day...This was a very " sweet " poem ..enjoyed every piece...kudos

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    Abba Elijah aka elijagod 4 years ago from Abuja - Nigeria

    Thanks Ocfireflies !

    I'm glad you enjoyed reading it

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    ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

    very interesting and creative, much enjoyed V+