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A Waltz With The Gods

Updated on April 23, 2013
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Poems are personal and these gems are as a result of direct experiences with inner spaces of consciousness.


I danced in the fire

And merged into ecstasy.


I found my cosmic lover

And we morphed into worlds.

Flying as ether,

A flame from space to space.


She died and found herself.

And we danced in the Sun.


I became the fire

And melted again and again,

And made love to the Sun

And became the Sun.


She awoke from death filled.

And accepted the smallness of the ant.

Humbled.


Mother of the Light protect my way,

So I may dance with the Sun always.


Fire as strength. Fierce.


And she danced with her cosmic lover.


Life.


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    • Deborah Brooks profile image

      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      this is simply beautiful.. I am so glad I saw it posted on Facebook

      blessings and hugs

      Debbie

    • Laurinzo Scott profile image

      Live To Write 

      6 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      Beautiful poem Jewels... very beautiful indeed. I am glad I came accross your poetry, will defintiely be reading more.

      Laurinzo

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      7 years ago from Australia

      Thanks Micky Dee. Upward and inward - the only way to fly.

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 

      7 years ago

      A cosmic lover is better than none! I need to look up! Great write.

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      7 years ago from Australia

      Thankyou Tatjana and Amy, very pleased you dropped in.

    • AmyTaylor profile image

      AmyTaylor 

      7 years ago

      Amazing description...thank you for the trip to the sun and the story of love...

    • Tatjana-Mihaela profile image

      Tatjana-Mihaela 

      8 years ago from Zadar, CROATIA

      Beautiful and passionate poem, Jewels, thank you...

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      8 years ago from Australia

      I can say an alien visited. :D

    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 

      8 years ago

      .... I'm originally from Mars so I could handle this!!!

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      8 years ago from Australia

      epigramman wrote via fan mail: "you are such a lovely writer ... so believe me the pleasure is all mine!

      And I will play (On the) Beautiful Blue Danube - just for you!"

      I had to add it. As I read back through everyone's comments, this is proof the WWW can be an amazing space. Heartness.

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      8 years ago from Australia

      A lovely compliment, thankyou so much epigramman. I love Strauss waltzes.

    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 

      8 years ago

      your wonderful sense of poetic timing and eloquent wording reminds me of a Strauss waltz - and a beautiful thing that is!

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      8 years ago from Australia

      I feel swooned all of a sudden. Smiling ear to ear from the warmth of your words. That was fun MFB.

    • MFB III profile image

      MFB III 

      8 years ago from United States

      I am often guilty

      of worshipping the sun,

      becoming a burnt offering

      drenched in oils,

      and when I am splayed

      like bacon on the beach,

      and her warm fingers

      massage all of my flesh,

      I drift into a paradise

      unlike anything felt daily

      in the humdrum of life...

      she carries me away,

      back to my fondest moments

      that fate granted me,

      my first kiss, just as warm

      and invigorating,

      or my mothers arms,

      though she is long since

      passed on beyond the

      realm of the sun,

      and so many lazy days

      as a child playing

      make believe under

      her watchful gaze.

      I like to walk in the rain,

      and feel nature wash me

      in it's essence,

      I have been known to lie

      in a babbling brook and

      just listen to its sweet song,

      I have even rolled naked

      in the snow and then plunged

      into a warmth similiar to

      the suns in a hot tub,

      but there is nothing like

      a day on the beach,

      basking in her heavenly face.

      Great hub...

      let's go dancing together

      sometime on two distant shores

      and remember this comment

      as we giggle at the beauty

      of it all~~~MFB III

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      8 years ago from Australia

      It certainly was Ioua. Beautifully imprinted.

    • loua profile image

      loua 

      8 years ago from Elsewhere, visiting Earth ~ the segregated community planet

      I'd say this is one of those subtle body tactile escapades of exquisite enchantment...

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      8 years ago from Australia

      Now I'm going to have to know the opening of Barbarella!

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      bloodnlatex 

      8 years ago

      I was reminded of the opening of Barbarella. Great Job!

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      9 years ago from Australia

      Glad you both enjoyed my words. I loved the space if came from.

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      Hack Retis 

      9 years ago

      Holy smokes! This is beyond words. In fact, I have to stop typing. I can't do a comment justice.

    • shamelabboush profile image

      shamelabboush 

      9 years ago

      Really amusing, an artistic and vague poem. I enjoyed every word!

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      9 years ago from Australia

      Naz, I'm blushing.

      Hey cheaptrick, it must be my magnetism :D  And I waltz with the gods, that helps! LOL.

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      cheaptrick 

      9 years ago from the bridge of sighs

      jewels,you were the first to welcome me which sets you on a pedestal in my mind.you wouldn't believe the intellectual level of the people in our town.you may not remember but we were commenting on the difference and function of the spirit and soul.that was my first contribution to H P.jewels,your comment on what i said made me whole again and confirmed that i am not stupid or deluded into thinking I"m inteligent.it was just one word   "nice",i don't no how you do it but i am committed to you as a true bodhisattva...peace...

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      nazishnasim 

      9 years ago

      No seriously Jewels, name your bribing sum that you offered God for such exquisite ecstasy! Simply loved the way your words glided over raw passion! It was just like water above fire!

      Simply Amazing!

      *notes down Jewels name in her notebook*

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      9 years ago from Australia

      Enelle, thankyou so much.

      BP - you are welcome anytime..

    • blondepoet profile image

      blondepoet 

      9 years ago from australia

      That was awesome, darn I just love putting my nose into some great poetry

    • Enelle Lamb profile image

      Enelle Lamb 

      9 years ago from Canada's 'California'

      I would have to agree with Toad and RedElf...read it twice...great imagery

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      9 years ago from Australia

      Thankyou RedElf, glad you came to visit.

    • RedElf profile image

      RedElf 

      9 years ago from Canada

      Came across your fine words courtesy of another hubber. goldentoad put it quite well. I look forward to reading more of your hubs.

    • Raven King profile image

      Raven King 

      9 years ago from Cabin Fever

      Hi astrology expert. Cool poem!

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      9 years ago from Australia

      Thanks RK, appreciated.

      GM, I checked the vid, I could relate to the imagery at the end particularly. Thanks for your kind words.

    • GeneriqueMedia profile image

      GeneriqueMedia 

      9 years ago from Earth

      Freaking awesome, yet again...

      "

      I found my cosmic lover

      And we morphed into worlds.

      Flying as ether,

      A flame from space to space."

      Great use of pix! And this reminds me of a video..

      Negasonic Teenage Warhead by Monster Magnet

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wyokRzdDQ9A

      Sincerely,

      G|M

    • RKHenry profile image

      RKHenry 

      9 years ago from Neighborhood museum in Somewhere, USA

      I'm very glad you posted this in the April Poetry forum. Thanks for sharing. Lovely it is.

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      9 years ago from Australia

      Vulnerability is a strength, hard at times, boy can it be hard!

    • Russ Baleson profile image

      Russ Baleson 

      9 years ago from Sandhurst, United Kingdom

      Opening up and bravely flinging oneself into it all. Dancing with the sun. Vulnerability is a strength.

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      9 years ago from Australia

      Christoph. Yes.

      G_ma, hugs back to you.

    • G-Ma Johnson profile image

      Merle Ann Johnson 

      9 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      Feelings now gone from my life...but yahooo for those that still can share and feel...G-Ma :O) Hugs & Peace

    • Christoph Reilly profile image

      Christoph Reilly 

      9 years ago from St. Louis

      Hmmm.  Have a nice love affair, did we?  I know the feeling, when love, closeness, and yes, sex, seem to lift us to a higher plane, a different level of existence.  Thanks for sharing your poem and your emotion.

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      C. C. Riter 

      9 years ago

      What were you smoking? left handed cigarettes? to mkae love like that I would fly. thanks

    • Frieda Babbley profile image

      Frieda Babbley 

      9 years ago from Saint Louis, MO

      "Mother of the Light protect my way,  So I may dance with the Sun always."

      Those were my favorite lines.  Like a prayer spoken by any age. 

    • Jewels profile imageAUTHOR

      Jewels 

      9 years ago from Australia

      goldentoad - that was exactly the feeling, was a special experience, glad you could take the trip with me.

      Cris A - thanks so much for visiting.

    • Cris A profile image

      Cris A 

      9 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      i like the "into and out of" imagery. divine. thanks for sharing :D

    • goldentoad profile image

      goldentoad 

      9 years ago from Free and running....

      I felt I was floating in space with some passionate lovers tangled up in a never ending affair

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