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Can't Stop Falling

Updated on June 18, 2013

I can't stop falling for you

You can't stop falling for me

The problem is we both believe

It was never meant to be

I need my freedom

And my space

You need someone that's always there

I like to keep things to myself

You always want to share

You hate my movies

And never read

How did cupid get this wrong?

I refuse to fall in love with someone

That hates my favorite song

Some would say that I'm a fool

If I let you get away

But loving you just isn't worth

The price we'd have to pay

Compromise has always been

A dirty word to me

So even though it hurts like hell

It's time to set you free


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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      it's like exactly opposite. maybe he doesnt have the half heart you're looking for.

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      Rajeev Patel 4 years ago from India


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      pennyofheaven 4 years ago from New Zealand

      Letting go is never easy. Awesome poem.

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      Angel_In_Disguise 4 years ago

      I loveee this poem, I've been in the same situation myself. Voted up. Good work.

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      Kara Monterey 4 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thank you!

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wonderful poem full of emtion that you wrote so well.

      Voted up, beautiful and interesting, Joyce.

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      You're opening doesn't fit with your close. I was lured in with a positive open, then had my heart crushed at the end.

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      Barbara Radisavljevic 4 years ago from Templeton, CA

      Been there, done that. If this was written from life, you made the right decision. @ phillydreamer, sometimes life is like that. Endings aren't always happy. But they are sometimes happier when there is some temporary pain to stop what might become permanent pain later on.

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      Sharon Christy 4 years ago from India

      I've often wondered where relationships go wrong, now I seem to understand. Very interesting, writing style was just awesome, wish you find your true love soon as I have done, you'll know, trust me! ;) Bless you!

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Been there!!!!!

      And setting the other free.. I believe is the best option for both .... or else... life becomes hell .... and the more time you spend.. the more difficult it becomes to get out....

      Nice write

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