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You Take My Heart Away
YOU TAKE MY HEART AWAY
You take my heart away by the look in your eyes,
I see myself in them and some sweet insights,
Emotions shining bright, your intentions for our
Stronger romantic bonding are just right!
You see me the way you would have touched me,
And I melt at that moment by the heat in your
You take my heart away by the way you hold my hands,
I feel your companionship and an assurance of lasting
Those walks with you in solitaire,
So close you are to me and I have no fears.
The moments of these feelings I want you to know,
How my heart is reeling
And I just know you’ll be with me always,
For us to have “long-lasting, happy days”.
You take my heart away when you grip me by my
You touch me slowly and make no haste,
I’m taking in your scent and there’s no time to waste,
You are so close to me, yet the distance seems so great!
To come nearer to you, I can’t wait.
Wanna know the effect of these little escapades?
That we’ll always be one in love like this,
And you are my Soulmate.
You take my heart away when you listen to my talks,
To whatever I say, about the happenings of the day,
And do not just judge me and walk away,
When you let me glimpse into what is on your mind,
And in your heart,
Things which made you smile, and problems which you
Your intentions to just let it be, or to act upon and
Make a new Start!
You take my heart away when you do things which
Make you special,
When you let me know How Special I AM!
About unique characteristics which make me, and
That Special I always will be. J
Be it leaving a rose on my bed-side every morning,
Or cooking breakfast on Sundays and Dinner on some
.I love it when you show its OUR Home, and share the
Duties on our ‘Cleanliness-Drive Days’,
You take my heart away when you endeavour
to make me independent,
Not leaving me alone still, like always,
Calling my friends for party on my Birthday,
Or arranging for just the two of us on other special
Be it the gift of a vacation or some other costly possession,
It always mirrors you and your love for me.
So I promise to pour my cup of love & care on you,
As its your way, till the end of our ‘Earthly Stay’.
I had created this Poem to submit in a Competition of Romantic Poetry. Every one have their own idea and experiences in and about Romance, Love. In creating this poetry, all I had to do was remember and feel all that which was my idea of perfect love relationship, perfect romance, my dreams. I live my life and dreams through poetry and I guess this one poem has become one of the all time favorite creations of mine. :-)I am curious to get others' feedback, in order to improve myself in future. :)
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