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Entwined In The Sea of Love~

Updated on January 16, 2014
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CrisSp is your Emergency Specialist at 37 Thousand feet. A writer without a niche. Wonderwoman consumed by wanderlust!

Hissing waves we kissed~
Hissing waves we kissed~ | Source
Unveiling anxious desires~
Unveiling anxious desires~ | Source
Hands clasp together~
Hands clasp together~ | Source

Good read from Rolly A. Chabot

Stripped in the sea

Gentle breeze of summer nights

Hissing waves we kissed.


Hissing waves we kissed

On glorious August month

As the moon light glows.


As the moon light glows

To unveil anxious desires

Hands clasp together.


Hands clasp together

Beneath the midnight blue haze

Standing still.


Standing still

Breath hitched our bodies’ shiver

Your lips taste divine.


Your lips taste divine

Pleasure I cannot deny

Bliss for the moment.


Bliss for the moment

In the sand we both laid down

Souls lost in the mist.

It is we entwined
It is we entwined | Source
Cold soft waves washed our bare feet~
Cold soft waves washed our bare feet~ | Source

More from a fellow hubber Rick Stephen (a.k.a. poeticfool)

Souls lost in the mist

Cold soft waves washed our bare feet

Then came honey rain.


Then came honey rain

Mother nature speaks out

Of love all night long.


Of love all night long

Ravenous like a drunken wolf

Wicked and bewitched.


Wicked and bewitched

Against the odd love affair

Realm of fantasies.


Realm of fantasies

Spring back and forth with hope

I crashed in your chest.


I crashed in your chest

Drift becomes a placid roar

Life is a big beach.


Life is a big beach

This is about you and me

In my wildest dream.


In my wildest dream

Of carnal yearning and more

I see you and me.


I see you and me

In the heaves of yin and yang

It is we entwined.


It is we entwined

In our graceful humanness

Stripped in the sea.

~XOXO~

Copyright @CrisSp~TM/08.15.13. Read me: "The heart of my soul speaks to the soul of my heart by writing." ~

© 2013 CrisSp

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Cris, I think you've designed your own form of poetry! I've never seen ending lines become beginning lines. Brilliant! Awesome poem, Cris. I remember romantic nights on the beach - there's nothing like it.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      bravewarrior: Hello Sha! Appreciate your arrival here. This is actually an American haiku in a progressive poetic verse, using 17-stanza. Trying to polish my now rustic head in creative writing, hence you see the beginning of the line becomes the ending (very bottom) as well and so on...I hope you enjoy the rest of the summer and thanks again for coming by.

      Love from the sky~

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Way cool. Although I write poetry, I don't know the various styles. I kinda have my own. But that's me. I've never really followed any kind of structure. Which is odd from someone who is very organized! I guess my creative side releases me from my structured side.

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      Susan Zutautas 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      I love your haiku! I've read and written so many and must say yours has hit my favorite list!

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      It's been a long day and I needed a touch of beauty to wrap it up, and you provided it. Love the ending line becoming the beginning line...very clever and very well-done my friend.

      love from Oly

      bill

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Stunning and passionate with most amazing haiku poetry, from our love from the sky and now from the sea! Yes, I do remember such, for when we were first married oh so long ago at the young ages of 18 and 19, and my husband was stationed in Tampa, Florida, and this just brings back lovely memories of being young and enjoying that sea of love entwined at Clearwater Beach, Florida : )

      Really amazing imagery and music choice ... just perfect, awesome Cris!!!

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Well written Haiku, thank you for sharing. Jamie

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      Poetic Fool 3 years ago

      Cristina, this is a wonderful piece full of love, passion and desire. The form is fascinating with the last line of the previous stanza becoming the first line in the next and then coming full circle with the first line in the poem also being the last. I'm sure you had to work a bit on this one but the effort shows, it's beautiful! Also, thanks for placing the Amazon link to my book, that was a very generous gesture. I'm sure Rolly appreciates it too. Voted up and much more!

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      I like the many droplets of haikiu..s you have rained here great collection of words expressing the many desires and feelings brilliant :)

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      rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

      Simply beautiful! Thank you for sharing! (Voted Up) -Rose

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      carol stanley 3 years ago from Arizona

      Beautiful words and photos and remembering about love.

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      Hawaiian Odysseus 3 years ago from Southeast Washington state

      Ah, Cris!

      An old man can dream, can't he?

      And you provide the opiate with your lovely words and between the lines promises.

      Shades of Cicero and Odysseus.

      Sweet dreams...sweet promises...sweet surrender.

      A sudden appetite for chilly con carnal. : )

      Aloha, my friend!

      ~Joe

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Love is great, love is pure,love is what you make of it such a lovelypoem

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      The imagery was so real I could feel the sand in my...you know what! : )

      Beautiful work!

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      Anna Haven 3 years ago from Scotland

      Beautifully and skillfully done.

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      Janet Giessl 3 years ago from Georgia country

      Absolutely wonderful words written in an interesting style I'm not familiar with. But I could really feel the emotions.

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Real hot. Your poem is amazing.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Your structure of the poem is refreshing, and the words are equally beautiful. You did very well with this one, creating the right mood and ambiance, too, with the pictures.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Susan. I am honored. See you around...

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thanks Bill. You very well deserved a nice relaxing day and I hope you had a great one. Take care.

      Love from the sky~

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      Dianna Mendez 3 years ago

      Very beautifully written.

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      Girish puri 3 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Lovely haiku, very different and deep, thanks, Cris.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Hi Faith! So sorry, it took 13 days for me to acknowledge your presence here. I was moving, has moved out and now moved in to the new place. Lol! As always, it's great to see you here and thank you for sharing your experience. Glad you enjoyed this piece.

      Love from the sky. ~

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Jamie. Pleasure to share. Take care.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Poetic Fool: My pleasure and thank you for the compliments.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Hello and thank you for coming by Frank Atanacio. I appreciate your kind words.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thanks Rose. Have a great long weekend to you. See you around HP.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Carol. Hope all is well with you.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Joe, I always enjoy your comments and I miss your writing my hawaiianodysseus. I was away for 13 days and now a-quarter settled in the new place and lovin' it except for the laundry. Lol!

      And as always, thank you.

      Love from the sky~

      Love from the sky~

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      DDE: Love indeed is great. Thank you for stopping by. Happiness always!

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Lol Wayne but thank you for reading.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Anna! Peace and love to you.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Hi Janet! I love playing with words and love this form of poetry (haiku). I hope this wasn't that intense for you. :) Cheers my friend!

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      vkwok: Thank you and aloha!

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      aviannovice: Thank you. Say hello to our feathered friends in the sky.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      teaches12345: Thank you.

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      No, thank you Girish. Hope all is well with you.

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      Sueswan 3 years ago

      Hi CrisSP

      Sweet, Sensuous, Passionate and Romantic. Loved the line, "then came honey rain"

      I hope you are doing well. Have a great weekend.

      Voted up +++

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Hi Sue! So nice to see you here...been away and was caught up in the busy life outside HP but all is well. Thank you for coming by and as always, I very much appreciate your comments. Take care.

      Love from the sky~

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      love your poetry... Cris.. elegant and sensuous.. erotic but with class. ...nice!

      thank you for the follow..hope you like my poetry..

      Michael

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      cleaner3: Thank you for your readership my fellow poet. I'll see you around HP...keep on writing, express yourself!

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      cleaner3: Thank you for your readership my fellow poet. I'll see you around HP...keep on writing, express yourself!

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      ahorseback 3 years ago

      Wee love the imagination don't we Chrisp, and this leaves me enough perfect visions for the day!........Ed

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      ahorseback, Ed! Where have you been hiding my friend? Glad to see you here and yes, who would have understand what our creative minds and beautiful hearts dictate but a fellow creative filled with lots of imaginations and visions. Thanks Ed. Hope all is well with you my friend.

      Love from the sky~

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      Insightful Tiger 3 years ago

      WOW! love it!

      I felt the waves and saw the moon. I loved the poetry style that mimicked waves. All I want to do now is go to the beach with my husband. Thank you.

      Love to you sis :)

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      Insightful Tiger 3 years ago

      WOW! love it!

      I felt the waves and saw the moon. I loved the poetry style that mimicked waves. All I want to do now is go to the beach with my husband. Thank you.

      Love to you sis :)

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      CrisSp 3 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Hey there Insightful Tiger! So nice to see you here and thank you. Hope you have a peaceful week with your hubby.

      Love from the sky~

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