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Those Passionate Eyes~

Updated on July 21, 2015
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CrisSp is your Emergency Specialist at 37 Thousand feet. A writer without a niche. Wonderwoman consumed by wanderlust!

Those Passionate Eyes
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For many years she longed for you

She yearned to wrap you in her passion

To hold you tight and to seal a kiss

Hang loose her shoulder of champagne.


Those gentle hands she anxiously imagine

Running along her shiny black hair

With all fondness she freely confessed

The riot of desire that only you can tame.


The lush and lust and hush

Her poltroon soul you set in fire

Powerless she took the unholy risk

Of knowing you and not knowing you at all.


Thoughts of you quickens her breath

Her heart goes beating faster than a hurricane

Sounding much of a vintage cliché

She let you in her own despair.

It's her greatest fault that she can't let go

Of your beautiful eyes that sets her agleam

With no intentions to forget not even in her sleep

For as long as there is spring you will remain.


Two souls entwined from dusk until dawn

Or even on pitch dark, she wouldn't mind

As long as she sees those passionate eyes

That silently speak of eternal flame.


Those passionate eyes she can’t forget

No matter what, the enchantment will prevail

In her heart and in her soul

For she loves you then and even now.

♥♥♥

Copyright@CrisSp~TM / 09-2012. "The heart of my soul speaks to the soul of my heart by writing." ~

© 2012 CrisSp

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      Joseph De Cross 4 years ago

      Wha a passionate poem, that wants me to hand those black boots to you and see how passionate you can walk. Lol! Kidding! Those eyes really go with the inspiration. A darker side of an inviting shade. Longing to dechipher the words and try to see if you can love as you write...

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Lord for being the first to arrive. Gotta to do what I have to do...express myself. Peace and love to you from the sky~

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      HattieMattieMae 4 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Very nice, and holds the women's position in moments when you don't know if the love will remain or return. :)

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      As always, an amazing poem! I love the way this feels!

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Amazing piece of poetry, great hub, voted up.

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Living in the moment and wondering about the future all in one. Those are days long passed, alas. Great Poem! Up & Interesting!

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      HattieMattieMae, nice to meet you. Thank you for stopping by. I'm glad you can connect with the poem.

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Namaskar girishpuri! Thank you for your feedback.

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      btrbell, I try to jot down thoughts when I'm most vulnerable. Thank you for your coming back to my hub. Sending you some sunshine from the north.

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Hello rcrumple! Happy to see you here. Yes, indeed you are right--"those are days long passed" but all things bright and wonderful because love simply never dies. Thanks for your visit and everything.

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      This is so flirty, Cris! I would like to share and repost a link to this beautiful poem of yours in my Passionate Poetry page on Facebook. I'm doing it now, thanks!

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      It'll be an honor coffeegginmyrice. Thank you. Just so you know, there's a much wilder version of that poem, eh? Unfortunately, I had to moderate it for HPs' sake. Lol!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      I love this, so very passionate and dramatic. Great write. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Faith Reaper.Live, Laugh, Love~

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ....such passion, intensity and romantic yearning here - it just burned a hole right through my computer screen - and I am left having a cigarette - and I don't even smoke!

      sending you warm wishes and good energy to you from lake erie time ontario canada 10:09am on a wild and windy day by the lake

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Ha..ha..ha...epi, you're the man! This romantic fool is feeling the love from this community of great people like you. Lord De Cross implied a spanking of myself with my black boots from "This Pretty Black Dress". I just love you guys!

      Thanking you for the much needed energy on this gloomy day.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ....the Lord himself implied a spanking with black boots in a black dress?? - oh dear me - don't get me going here - it's only mid-afternoon at lake erie - lol lol

      2:40pm

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Uh-oh, CrisSp do not want to go any further....now let's behave or Lord will smack us both! (:

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Cris , reading your heart I now know how sweet you are , and a helluva poet........:-}

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      ahorseback, thank you for visiting...you just made me smile like a silly girl with your comment. Happy to see you here.

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      Hawaiian Odysseus 4 years ago from Southeast Washington state

      Timeless...enigmatic...alluring...

      A poem that reminds me of the island I'm from and the simple and very honest non-verbal cues of my ancestors.

      Like watching a hula dancer with my essence rather than with the crippling imposition of the western world's Freudian conflicts.

      Beautiful...simply beautiful! Thank you for sharing this gift, CrisSp!

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you very much hawaiianodysseus! This poetic fool is a living testament of insanity who's thriving through gracious compliments received from other great fellow hubbers like you; who believe in the power of words and brave enough to express their thoughts. Love to you from the sky~

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      Ian D Hetri 4 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Woh! you have your with words. Absolutely passionate poet you are. The poem certainly wakes up the sleeping passion...

      Brilliant piece.

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thanks Ian! Appreciate you stopping by. Cheers!

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      Rolly A Chabot 4 years ago from Alberta Canada

      Hi again CriSp... passionate words and passionate eyes allow you to write from the heart... Now that is a true gift...

      Hugs from Canada

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Rolly! You are the sweetest! Hugs back to you!

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      schoolgirlforreal 4 years ago from USA

      Wondering who this was written for, came across as very romantic and classy, really liked the insight into the relationship.

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      @schoolgirlforreal: Let's just keep the subject of those passionate eyes a mystery for now...lol! Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment. Appreciate that.

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Beautiful, passionate, sensual, lovely!

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you xstatic! I hope you're having a great start of the New Year! Cheers!

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      Live To Write 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      Absolutely beautiful ... "powerless she took the unholy risk..." Wow!!!

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Laurinzo.

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      schoolgirlforreal 4 years ago from USA

      Aw, CrisSp, I don't blame you ;) I tried lol. many have tried and succeeded with me...but it's cool to be a mystery

      :)

      cheers

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      schoolgirlforreal: Lol! Thanks for coming by. Yes, cheers!

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      Galley Queen 4 years ago

      Passionately intense!

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Galley Queen: You intrigue me all the time. Thank you for dropping by. See next...

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      rose-the planner 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

      Such a beautiful poem! Your images are lovely. Thank you so much for sharing. (Voted Up) -Rose

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      LKMore01 4 years ago

      Voted up and awesome CrisSp. This is the kind of passionate poem that puts the rose back in my cheeks and a lusty smile on my face from reminding myself what that kind of intensity feels like (again and again and again.) Excellent .

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi CrisSp

      "Two souls entwined from dusk until dawn

      Or even on pitch dark, she wouldn't mind

      As long as she sees those passionate eyes

      That silently speak of eternal flame."

      Your words burn with passion.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      You have created a very true mood with much passion here.....its flowing very well ...Intense and very romantic as well...votes up and sharing.

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      moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR

      VOW..BEAUTYFULL POEM

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Hi Rose! Thank you so much for the compliments. Love back at 'cha!

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      LKMore: Nice to see you here. Thank you for coming by. I actually enjoyed your comments and thank you for the compliments. Now, keep that lovely (and lusty) smile and rose in your cheeks. Cheers!

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Sue. Now, be careful with those burning passions. :)

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      dghbrh: Thank you. Happy to see you here. Take care.

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      moneycop: Thank you.

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      Mohan Kumar 4 years ago from UK

      I was just posting a revised hub of mine called' In your eyes' when this caught my eye. What an evocative and beautiful poem Cristina. Lovely!

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      oh and by the way ....You have awesome eye's ! Be well my friend !

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      Phoenixx 4 years ago from Roseburg, OR

      Nice poem! I like it.

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Docmo! Very nice to see you here.

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      ahorseback: Ed, my friend- good to see you back. I hope you had a good, relaxing, mini vacation...and thank you for always stopping by.

      Love from the sky~

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Phoenix: Thank you. Glad you like it.

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