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Ghost of Love Shadows of Fear – Answer to Writer’s Challenge by Genna East

Updated on September 15, 2016

The Challenge.

Answer to fellow Hubber Genna East's challenge to write a poem of any kind expressing emotions prompted by the two videos shown in her hub. Both videos are from the movie "Of the Shadow and the Grey."

There is a link to Genna's hub at the bottom and also links to the other wonderful Hubbers who also answered her challenge.

Eyes that follow him everywhere
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My Poem

Ghost of Love Shadows of Fear

© by Shyron Shenko

He can feel their icy glare

Eyes follow him everywhere


The biting cold cannot compare

To the bone chill of grief and despair


Looking at her picture he read the note

He wrote the day she passed away


Hungry eyes surround him, shadows closing in

He prepares for one last fight to the bitter end


I’m here she whispered,

You’ve not lost me at all ...


Once more into the fray….

Into the last Good fight I’ll ever know.

Live and die on this day…

Live and die on this day…

Note to Genna

Thank you for the challenge, but just like Jodah, I found it hard to cram all the emotions into 80 words.

This was sad (my emotion) but I felt compelled to answer your challenge.

© 2015 Shyron E Shenko

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      Shyron E Shenko 9 months ago from Texas

      Au fait, thank you for the comment, compliment and for sharing this.

      I do hope all is well with you, take care

      Blessings and Hugs dear friend.

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      C E Clark 9 months ago from North Texas

      Came back to share this poem, so well expressed, again. You always have the knack for picking just the right words . . .

      So awful hot of late with the high humidity. Hope you got your grass done so you can stay in the cool again. Hope all is well . . . Take care, dear friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 13 months ago from Texas

      Au fait, thank you so very much for the comments and compliments.

      We are doing okay and hope you are doing well. It is back to cutting grass, spent most of the day cutting yesterday.

      Blessings and hugs always my dear friend.

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      C E Clark 14 months ago from North Texas

      Came back to give this excellent poem another share.

      What a nasty day we're having weather-wise. A winter day for Texas. I'd rather have a day like this every now and then than the cold winters we've had the last few years and especially the ice storms. Hope you and John are in where it's warm and dry and that all is well there. Take care, dear friend. Blessings always . . .

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      Shyron E Shenko 17 months ago from Texas

      Devika, thank you so very much for reading this and the compliment.

      I do hope all is well with you, blessings my friend.

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      Devika Primić 17 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      This is amazing! So greatly told and with such interest.

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      Shyron E Shenko 17 months ago from Texas

      Mary, thank you so much for the compliment and the comment. Yes I like wolves to but I would not want to face one as Liam did.

      Blessings and Hugs my dear friend.

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      Mary Craig 17 months ago from New York

      So touching and so real. Wolves are marvelous creatures, but survival is in our blood.

      80 words or not, this was beautifully done.

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      Shyron E Shenko 17 months ago from Texas

      saddlerideri, thank you for the compliment and comment, I do appreciate you.

      I too love wolves but I would fight to the bitter end.

      Blessings my friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 17 months ago from Texas

      Cris, thank you for the comment and some love from the sky.

      Blessings and hugs from Texas.

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      saddlerider1 17 months ago

      Very visual indeed, I know that as much as I love wolves, if I was ever put in that position that Liam was faced with, I too would fight for my life, one Alpha against another. Your words were penetrating, bravo well done.

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      CrisSp 17 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      I've read this earlier but couldn't leave a message. Anyway, love the poem but most importantly your great attitude towards it and always being up to the challenge.

      Sending some love from the sky. ~

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Patricia, thank you for the comment, compliments, sharing and the Angels that you always send. I will send them back with blessings and hugs from me.

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      Patricia Scott 18 months ago from sunny Florida

      What a challenge!! Poetry is an art form that holds me challenged in and of itself...so for you to have shared such a poignant piece in so few words is way beyond remarkable!!! Awesome.

      Angels are on the way this morning ps

      shared

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      moonlake, thank you for the comment, I am so happy to see you, I have missed you so much. I truly hope all is well with you.

      Blessings and hugs.

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Marie (truthfornow) thank you so very much for the comment. I am so glad you liked the picture. I do appreciate you.

      Blessings my friend.

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      moonlake 18 months ago from America

      Enjoyed your poem. You picked the best photo for your poem with the wolf.

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Shauna, thank you for the comments, I am so glad you like my poem.

      Blessings and Hugs my friend.

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      truthfornow 18 months ago from New Orleans, LA

      Very intense. I love the eyes in the first picture. They look right into your soul. You said a lot in a few words.

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      Shauna L Bowling 18 months ago from Central Florida

      I love your poem, Shyron. You managed to convey intense emotion in a few words. Very well done!

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Kim,

      My friend, thank you I appreciate the comment and compliment. Happy you are loving my poetry.

      Blessings and Hugs

      Shyron

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      snakeslane, thank you for the compliment and comment, I really appreciate you.

      Blessings

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Mike (mckbirdbks) thank you for the compliment and comments.

      Blessings always my friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Genna, thank you for the compliment and for writing this challenge. I very much enjoyed doing this one.

      Can't wait for the next one.

      Blessings and Hugs Dear Genna.

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Devika, thank you for the comment and compliment.

      Blessings and hugs dear friend

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      John, thank you for the comment and compliment.

      Blessings and hugs dear friend

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Larry, thank you so much for the comment.

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Dana, thank you for the compliment and comment, I do appreciate you.

      Blessings and hugs dear friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Au fait, thank you for the comment.

      It was good talking with you yesterday, glad the cooler weather is agreeing with your rest time.

      Blessings and hugs to you dear friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      R.Q. thank you for the comment, and compliment. I am glad you enjoyed the read.

      Best Regards to you also

      Shyron

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Sujaya, thank you for the comments glad you were touched.

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      ocfireflies 18 months ago from North Carolina

      Shyron,

      I agree with so many of the comments made by others. It has been so interesting to see what aspects of Genna's Challenge poets have zoomed in on, and you my friend, definitely captured the atmosphere which is such an integral part of the piece. LOVING YOUR POETRY.

      Blessings,

      Kim

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      snakeslane 18 months ago from Canada

      Shyron,

      "The biting cold cannot compare

      To the bone chill of grief and despair"

      You captured the intensity of the cold and the fear, well done!

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      mckbirdbks 18 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      This is a fine contribution to the challenge. You can feel the emotion you packed into this poetry.

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      Genna East 18 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

      This is beautiful! You have captured the spirit of both videos, I think, in stunning fashion. Thank you for participating, and for making this challenge all the more rewarding and enriching.

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      Devika Primić 19 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      You have a creative mind and made sure to surprise us with another one of your special hubs. Well done!

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      John Hansen 19 months ago from Queensland Australia

      A beautiful poem, Shyron and another fine response to this incredible challenge. Well done.

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      Larry Rankin 19 months ago from Oklahoma

      Wonderful response to this challenge.

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      Dana Tate 19 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Very nice work, I look forward to reading the other challenges.

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      C E Clark 19 months ago from North Texas

      Excellent choice of words to get your point across, as always. Very dramatic.

      Have loved these cooler temps the last few days. What a difference they make and it changes my schedule all around. More options and everything is easier. Hope John is much better than the last time we talked and that you have managed to stay well. Blessings and hugs . . .

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      Romeos Quill 19 months ago from Lincolnshire, England

      Very atmospheric Shyron, with hope triumphing there at the close, in surety that he would meet his love again.

      Enjoyed reading this one and a handsome reply to Genna's challenge.

      Thanks for a stirring write today.

      Best Regards;

      R.Q.

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      sujaya venkatesh 19 months ago

      touching

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      Shyron E Shenko 19 months ago from Texas

      Maria, my beautiful friend, I am so happy to see you. Thank you for the comment and compliment.

      Blessings and hugs my dear friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 19 months ago from Texas

      Ruby, thank you from the bottom of my heart, for your visit, your comments, and compliments.

      Blessings and hugs my beautiful friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 19 months ago from Texas

      Bill, thank you so much for the kind words. I appreciate you.

      Blessings to you always.

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      Shyron E Shenko 19 months ago from Texas

      Flourish, thank you for the comment, I do appreciate you.

      Blessings and hugs dear friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 19 months ago from Texas

      Ann, thank you for the compliment and comment.

      You are welcome.

      Blessings to you dear friend

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      Maria Jordan 19 months ago from Jeffersonville PA

      True love never dies.

      Beautiful response to Genna's challenge, dear Shyron.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 19 months ago from Southern Illinois

      This is beautiful Shyron. I love how you brought his last letter from his love into the poem. Priceless! Hugs

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      Bill Holland 19 months ago from Olympia, WA

      The challenge was very difficult for sure. 80 words is nothing to a writer, but you managed to pack quite a bit into those 80. Well done...great images...this came alive as I read it.

      blessings always

      bill

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      FlourishAnyway 19 months ago from USA

      I liked this. Intense. Dramatic.

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      Ann Carr 19 months ago from SW England

      This is beautiful poetry, Shyron. I don't think it matters if anyone goes over the word count just a little. I like how you added his final words of the video clip too.

      The rhythm and the pace with the final hope is well-crafted indeed.

      Thanks for including my link; much appreciated.

      Ann

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