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I Want You Even More

Updated on July 10, 2012
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We share each day, we share every word of love and emotion. How deep is our love, only God and we will ever know. Is it possible to love anymore completely, when I want you even more?

This love of ours gets better and better.



I Want You Even More

Two hearts

Two souls

Two bodies to share

To explore and excite

Through the day and the night

I want you even more!


Luscious lips feel the touch

To unite and fulfill

Each tongue to hone in

On pleasures for sure

Your smooth body

I want you even more!


And taste on your tongue

We will seek new emotions

And deep pleasure they’ll bring

Love reveals all

When you’re connected as one

I want you even more!


The physical, the mental

Two hearts become one

Every moment reveals love

Each second knows more

How our hearts beat together

I want you even more!


And forever we’re one

Love conquers all

We know that for sure

When you’re completely in love

You feel at least ten feet tall!

I want you even more!


This union we have

Will remain forever more

Passionate moments

Mean more that’s for sure

We have always loved

I want you even more!


But this love means even more

As we whisper our happiness

Each breath reveals more

We were born to make love

And we will continue for sure

I want you even more!


Your succulent lips

Make me want you even more!

I am so glad that I have found you

And this love will ensure

Complete happiness, today and ever more!

I want you even more!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you Ubanichijioke ... I have been away and have missed you!

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      So much love shown here! Wow!! You ve here such a passionate poem no wonder many are coming for more that one read. Am loving this poem infact, I want more...

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you very much James-wolve.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Very beautiful.It flows smoothly exploring the depth.I voted up.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Marcoujor - thank you so much!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow Robert - thank you so very much!

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Your words are a loving embrace, so beautiful.

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      rOBERT hEWETT SR. 4 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      A beautiful love poem so full of passionate imagery and emotion. I will be back to read more of your wonderful poems.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Debbie, your comment was so lovely, really sweet of you. Thank you. Have a great Halloween!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      that was a beautiful write.. I agree with mckbirddks I want you to write more.. You are most talented..

      sharing

      Debbie

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Mckbirdbks ... I will try!!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you very much Audrey ... have a great weekend.

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      mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      I Want You -to write- Even More

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Not that you are a romantic or anything!!! Beautiful write!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Twilight Lawns so much for your lovely message. My life has been rather hectic of late and HubPages reluctantly has taken somewhat of a back seat, but I shall definitely be over to check out your hubs again as soon as I have a chance.

      Take care now.

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      Twilight Lawns 4 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

      I just received your message, and, my friend, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. You are so kind, so generous, so lovely.

      I always look forward to your promise, romantic soul, sweet nature. And when I fed cynical and a little bitter, I know your words will lift my heart. And when I write a tender verse or two, I always hope you'll stumble upon it and you'll like it.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you so much Happyboomernurse - your comment was amazing. I have been so pre-occupied lately (in the most amazing positive way!) that I have not been as prolific on here as I might! Hope you are well and enjoying life. It is so wonderful when shared with the perfect person!!!

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      Gail Sobotkin 4 years ago from South Carolina

      Wow, it's a good thing it's a crisp fall morning cause if it was still summer I'd have a hard time cooling down after reading this sensual, sizzling, beautiful poem about desire, erotic pleasure and love.

      Voted up across the board except for funny.

      Hub Hugs,

      Gail

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so very much Joy56. I appreciate your visit and commment. Thank you again.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Epi. You always know how to romance a woman and your comment here is no exception. Thank you so much for your visit. I am so pleased that I have played some small part in bringing the love and romance side out of you and you have expressed it with your incredible love poetry. You are a man of so many talents and you have a tremendous feeling and a way with words. Not only that ... you also have a heart of gold. I shall be over to check more of your many hubs ... shortly. Thank you for ... simply being YOU!

      My Summer was more than great ...thank you ... shame about the weather here in England though!!! Hope you are enjoying every moment.

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      Joy56 4 years ago

      happy to know you are happy, and you have the gift of expressing those feeings and emotions so well. May this romance last forever.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ....well Miss S - funny you say that because I want you even more too - your poetry that is and I've been wanting you ever since we first met - and you made a man out of me - and I started writing love poetry - mainly because of you and your incredible love poetry - yes you are my muse. What else is left to say! lol lake erie time ontario canada and sending warm wishes and good energy at 9:07pm and hoping sincerely that you and the love of your life had a nice summer

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Hi Leni - thank you as always. I trust you are well and enjoying every moment.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Docmo - wow what can I say but THANK YOU so much! You are amazing and I love it when you visit my hubs. So thank you SO much!!

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      Leni Sands 4 years ago from UK

      I love reading your poetry - it is so inspiring.

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      Mohan Kumar 4 years ago from UK

      You really have a way with your romantic, sensual and beautiful poetry. The words convey so much emotion and tend to linger in the mind long after finishing to read them. Bravo!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Hi Jackie, great to see you again. I haven't had much opportunity to be on HubPages recently and I have a lot to catch up with; including checking out your hubs! Thanks for your great comment and thank you for following me!

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Well, now, where's my oxygen! lol Hot stuff and sorry I got no notice and in fact it shows I am not even following you so I will fix that.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you Coffeegginmyrice!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Audrey, I so appreciate your comment - thank you.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Eiddwen, wonderful to have you visit again and thank you for your comment.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Dallaswriter. It is definitely easier to write about something that one experiences and something that is deep in one's soul.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you so much Vinaya Ghimire and I am so pleased that my poem cheered you so much!

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      Love to the max. Beautiful poem, acaetnna

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Beautiful and tender write about loving! You do this so very well!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      How truly beautiful my friend and here's to so many more to follow on here.

      Enjoy your weekend,

      Eddy.

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      dallaswriter 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Writing with passion is not always something that comes easy... We tend to write what we know and seldom can we write about what we want as my thoughts are with poetry, "it must seep from within the soul, from within the hard wiring" you just can't make that stuff up! Continue to be passionate about your love, keep the affair of your marriage vital and never stop loving or communicating. Love reading your story....

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Hi Acaetnna,

      I came back for a second read. This poem of yours cheered me very much.

      Cheers

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Nell Rose thank you so much. Love is a wonderful emotion and one that everyone should experience! I do - how lucky am I?!!!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Kashmir my friend. I have definitely been out of the loop for a while but now I am back on course!!!

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      Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

      A wonderful and heartfelt poem, ah love something I sort of remember! lol! voted up! cheers nell

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi my friend just thought i would read this awesome poem again. So nice to see you here on HP have not seen you for a bit.

      Have a great rest of the week and a awesome weekend !

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you Frank, you really are very kind. Thank you x

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      just revisiting this poem boy you're really good :)

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Girishpuri !

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Great touching hub, voted up.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you too Eiddwen. As you have probably noticed I have been a little pre-occupied away from HubPages recently! I am having the time of my life and loving being alive. Hope you are enjoying your life and are completely happy!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Wow acaetnna what do I say except Up up and away!!!

      you are so talented and I love to see your smiling face.

      Great words and here's to so many more to come.

      Eddy.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow KoffeeKlatch Gals ; thank you SO much - as always!

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      Susan Haze 4 years ago from Sunny Florida

      I just love your poetry. Love the deep feelings.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow Nighthag- thank you . You always know what to say to capture a girl's heart! Thank you.

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      such simple words you use to express a deep abiding love that you are so blessed with. Again another wonderful love poem that makes me yearn to fall in love all over again :)

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so very much Lyricwriter, I always really value your opinion. I am very fortunate I know to have a love like this.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Acaetnna, I agree with Denise. You have a beautiful heart and soul as it is read in every word of your poetry. You are a rare gem and your partner is very lucky:) To have that passion and love for someone, it just is a beautiful thing. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hi Denise. Thank you so much for dropping by, I always value your comments - thank you. I have been a little distacted recently and now I must check out your latest hubs!

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      Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

      I just love the way you bare your heart and soul with wild abandon...this is one more poem of delicious romantic lusciousness. Wonderful images to go along with the words, acaetnna. Thanks and voted up / beautiful.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      How lovely to see you here Docmo. I hope you are well and having fun. Thank you for visiting and for your lovely comment. I so appreciate that.

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      Mohan Kumar 5 years ago from UK

      Sensual, intimate, seductive and full of sweet emotion. Your poetry zings with electricity and warms the reader. What a wonderful expression of love, acaetnna. Loved it. beautiful.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      VocalCoach , thank you. I always so appreciate your visit and of course your wonderful comments. Thank you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow Vinaya Ghimire, thank you; that's amazing.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Tina, thank you. Your comments are always truly amazing -

      thank you so much. I shall pop over to see your latest hubs as soon as I get a chance.

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      Audrey Hunt 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      You are the love goddess of hubpages acaetnna. Once again you have created the supreme love poem with magnificent images to magnify the emotion. Voted up and beautiful...like you.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Beautiful! I came back for a second read.

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      Christina Lornemark 5 years ago from Sweden

      Wow, It is so wonderful to see another poem from you! No one can write about love the way you do and the words in this poem describe the real thing. Beautiful and voted up, up!

      Tina

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow Lovedoctor - thank you so much. I love your profile name by the way!!! Awesome!!

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      lovedoctor926 5 years ago

      Voted up beautiful. You painted a very good picture through the use of imagery.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hi KenWu, thank you. A pity you're not a romantic person, romance is so , so important as far as I am concerned. Thank you for being so completely honest anyway.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Samantha for your constructive criticism. I love that - that you have taken the time and trouble to give your opinions. Brilliant - I love it and thank you so much! I tend to disagree with you because i still consider this to be an adult saying. I so appreciate yout thoughts though and constructive suggetions - thank you so much.

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      KenWu 5 years ago from Malaysia

      That's beautiful.. I'm not a romantic person but I just love it very much.

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      SamanthaMiller11 5 years ago

      Aw this poem is sweet. It kind of reminds me of some of the things I say to my husband haha. It made me feel good when I read it. The only thing I would say, is the line "When you're in love, you feel at least ten feet tall!" seems a little awkward, it doesn't quite fit with the rest of the mood. It's still cute, but in a children's book way not a romantic way. If I were to make a suggestion, I would say something like "you feel solid and tall." but that's just my constructive criticism, I don't expect you to take it seriously haha. Wonderful poem all in all

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you CMCastro, yes love can certainly be beautiful.

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      Christina M. Castro 5 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      Another beautiful poem! Love is beautiful. :)

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Gypsy Rose Lee thank you. We are the fortunate ones whom have found their soul mates. It is a wonderful feeling to be truly in love and to feel this amazing emotion.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hi Cathy, thank you so much for stopping by. I always value your comments because not only are you a fine poet, but you just ooze love in abundance. Shall be over to check out more of your wonderful poetry as soon as I get a chance.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Martie I always value your indepth comments. You made a very interesting point. As long as one is happy and listens to their true heart I think that it must be love for sure. I guess I just fancied the idea of being able to want my man even more (if you know what I mean!!!!) I think it was the physical side of love that I was referring to in this poem.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Teaches 12345 - thank you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      B.Malin thank you as always.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. A really lovely and touching poem about true love. Reminded me of my husband and I as we're soulmates and we have a very loving relationship.

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Your poems always inspire and stand out. They are always romantic love poems. And they are beautiful when written like this with feelings and passion. Poets with passion are as unstoppable as bullets. Long live love. :)

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      Martie Coetser 5 years ago from South Africa

      acaetnna ~ I can but only say 'wow'. And I wonder, even if I love someone enough to want him even more, would I ever be able to be 'completely' in love? Fear of disappointment will always prevent me to be 'completely' in love. Maybe suspicions of all sorts is part of this fear. Maybe this completely in love thing is only possible for those who have never loved before and who have had the privilege to fall in love with the perfect soul mate.

      But I know I should not spoil your beautiful poem with this kind of a comment. Your poems promote hope and trust in love and lovers, and encourage us to want (and trust) our lovers even more...

      Bravo!

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Such a beautiful poem about love. You have great talent.

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      Wow, Acaetnna, Kinda leaves one Breathless...Beautifully set to the rhythm called, Love!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Rosemary, I know that you and I feel the same. When you are in love you know it will last forever.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Mckbirdbks - you are amazing - thank you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow Prasetio and wow and wow again. Thank you so much - I hope you are well.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Lady_E - thank uou aa always. Your comments are always so truly amazing - thank you so very much.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Your poems always make me smile, you are so much in love with your speacial man and reading your poems reminds me of how special my man is. May you feel this way forever :)

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      A poem with grace and charm and beauty.

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      prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

      I want you even more. I don't want you just as friend. But I want you as a family here. Beautiful poem and you always "hot". Vote up and take care :-)

      Prasetio

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      Elena 5 years ago from London, UK

      Oh... Mama Mia - this is a passionate one. Written beautifully as usual.

      You have an awesome way with words. Your words can turn a cloudy sky into a Sky with a beautiful Rainbow. :-)

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Love is such a wonderful emotion to experience - thank you so much Just Ask Susan.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Movie Master thank you, thank you so much.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Always Exploring, I always so value your opinion. Your poetry is so completely amazing in my opinion. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Awesome and thank you again.

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Your poems always make me want to fall in love again and again.

      Loved this one too!

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Your poems of love are beautiful - you have found something very special and I am so happy for you!

      Thank you for sharing with us and voted up.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Isn't it wonderful to love someone so completely. Your poetry is beautiful and i wish you only GREAT joy my friend...

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Kashmir - thank you, I have missed you.

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Another beautiful masterpiece written in love for two that are in love !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Vincent, my Shakespeare. You always make my heart melt with your wonderful words. Thank you so much for stopping by, I shall be over to see you shortly.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you Stricktlydating - we are definitely on the same wave length, we love love and romance.