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Love is Like a Sunbeam

Updated on March 16, 2012

Love is such a powerful and deeply special emotion. Somehow it takes over one's whole being. To find a deep and profound love is such a remarkable feeling. I simply cannot stop thinking about this special partner in my life. Without him my world would be torn a part. How fortunate for me that he shares these same feelings with me.

I think we all feel so much better when the sun is shining. That's how I feel about my love, it feels just like a sun beam. This husband of mine brightens every cell in my body. I gain strength and so much happiness from his love.


Love is Like a Sunbeam.

I love you, don't you realise
More than the entire world
Since we met and we kissed
My heart simply twirled

I so love your voice
And your special touch
When you whisper those words
I need you so much

We laugh in the sunshine
We sing in the rain
Whatever the weather
We cannot explain

These feelings we share
The touch of our skin
Lingering kisses
Probing within

We know we are blessed
With this love that we share
With this special bond
You can tell that we care

I look out the window
And watch you come home
The hours when you're working
Make me realise I'm not alone

For our love is always carried
In our hearts and our souls
We are never a part
This emotion simply controls

It's not easy to explain
How love conquers all
All we know is this feeling
Is really so cool

Love is like a sun beam
It captures your heart
This strong emotion
Wont tear us a part

The smile on your face
As you caress my skin
The warm whispers of love
As you enter within

We know that we're together
On this journey of life
Through the good times we have
Or the problems and strife

We breathe the same air
And have the same thoughts
We share the same interests
And we know we're good sports

Our love radiates out
And our smiles say it all
When you find such a love
You walk ten feet tall!


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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Beautiful! It's always so nice to see two people that are so much in love. Thank you for sharing this.

      Up and Beautiful, awesome too

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thanks so much Just Ask Susan, you are often so quick and first to the post! Thank you again!

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      CrisSp 5 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Came across your hub and I find it so beautiful. I can tell that you are a beautiful person inside-out. Will be checking on your other hubs. I'm pretty new here and quite gathering some inspirations from expressive hubbers like you. It'll be nice if you could come visit my hubs too. Live, Laugh, Love~

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Cris thank you and of course I shall be over to check out your hubs. Thank you so much for stopping by!

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi my friend, i enjoyed reading this very beautifully written poem,that was written with the love within your heart !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ahh, my sweet Lady of Rhyme . again you show why I put you in my hub, thanks for making my choices look very good. very nice poem. keep the love flowing like you know how..

      Michael

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh love.. and this hub is full of love.. it is simply beautiful... I loved this.

      Be blessed

      I voted way up my friend

      Debbie

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Every word is filled with love, this is so very beautiful.

      I am so happy for you both.

      Voting up and sharing.

      Best wishes Lesley

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      You do a remarkable job of connecting your poems with the most wonderful pictures.I am moved and can easily appreciate your love for your husband and day to day love that shows in all your writings.Thanks for sharing.

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      love itself is a melody in our life and creating and writing ii in words is not exploring it but also making an attempt to give revision to all of us to get happy and in love.

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      Ghaelach 5 years ago

      Good morning Acaetnna.

      When I see your name come up in my mail box, my heart skips a beat starts to beat a little faster as I know I'm going to feel your love coming from your words.

      Your words of love shouted for all the world to hear. Absolutely beautiful, as yourself.

      Take care Acaetnna and have a wonderful week.

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Sunnie Day 5 years ago

      Very beautiful and so happy you have this kind of love in your life. Your poem was so sweet and real!

      Hugs,

      Sunnie

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      Gail Sobotkin 5 years ago from South Carolina

      Oh this was so beautiful. Your prose poetry was like being carried on that sunbeam of love right along with you and the photos of shafting light and loving couples were breathtaking.

      Voted up across the board except for funny.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I simply adore reading your love poetry. You are so blessed to have found the perfect one. The pictures are beautiful and add to this piece ..Thank you..Blessings to you and yours..Smiles

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Kashmir56, you are awesome and so are your comments too! Thank you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Cleaner3 - thank you I am honoured!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Deborah, I am so lucky that I am full of love.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Movie Master, thank you so much, I am so pleased that you took the time to visit!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Dream On you are amazing, thank you so very much for your visit and comment.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Moneycop, awesome, what a wonderful comment. Thank you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Ghaelach, you are wonderful. I know that you can relatr to my situation. Always be happy in love my friend!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Sunnie Day, thank you so very much.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Happyboomernurse, thank you I so appreciate your visit and comment.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Always Exporing, a comment from such an awesome poet as you is so, so wonderful. Thank you so much!

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Your words always so beautiful and loved by all.

      Take care for sharing this beauty and have a wonderful weekend.

      Eddy.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Eiddwen - you are amazing and I always adore it when you stop by. I know that my weekend will be amazing because it always has been. Have a great one your self too!

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      Johnny 5 years ago

      There is a light in your love and it is always shinning so bright. I was feeling a bit down today and found this and as always, you touch my heart. Such a blessing you are, Johnny Love

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hi Johnny, how awesome to read your comment, you always brighten my day. Hey don't feel down, come back to HubPages, we all miss you - especially me!

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      Christina Lornemark 5 years ago from Sweden

      Love is wonderful and there are so many small things we can do and appreciate in a relationship. This poem is so beautiful and describes real love, what a fantastic feeling it is! You always manage to find the perfect photos that goes so well with the wonderful words! Thanks for spreading so much love,

      Voted up and more of course!

      Tina

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      Johnny 5 years ago

      I was banned from here. I have tried but it never lasts even a day.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow Thougtforce, your comments are also totally awesome - thank you so very much. It is so easy to write when one is so totally in love!

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      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      Your love is a resounding tribute to all lovers who love the way you both do and share. Hang on to it with all your lives for it comes once in our lifetime, true love that is.

      There are many people experimenting with love, lust and relationships, but very few find TRUE LOVE and stay with their lovers for life. You my dear friend express all the truths of real love and I am truly happy for you both.

      Keep loving, be the best of friends and you will cross the finish line together in Heaven. Hugs.

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      acaetnna you portray such a positive uplifting point of veiw.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Acaetnna, your heart is so pure my friend. Your poetry for love is breathtaking. This is just another example of love in words. Such a beautiful poem. Well done.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

      Absolutely beautiful. The pics of foests took my breath away along with the poem.

      Wonderful work. Take care.

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Hi, what a wonderful poem. I like your appreciation for your love. True and deep love is the greatest gift of life. It comes from a higher source, and needs to be treasured and cared for. Take care :-)

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Johnny you just need to be more conservative to begin with. There are ways and means just please be patient! HubPages is poorer, much poorer without you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Vincent my heart simply melts when I read your amazing words. You are my complete Shakespeare, I so really mean that. Thank you for taking the time to visit a humble love poet, me!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Mckbirdbks, I am honoured and I always love your visits too! Thank you xx

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thelyricwriter, you are always so amazing with your generous comments - thank you!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Dim Flaxenwick I always appreciate your wonderful comments.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      KatrineDalMonte - thank you. Love is always encompassing and completely divine! Just how lucky am I?!

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      Love is Like a Sunbeam and this Poem of yours Acedtnna, captures it all so well. Such a Happy, Sweet, Carefree read...You both are truly blessed...May those Sunbeams last Forever!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hello B.Malin, I have a real hunch that this love of ours WILL last forever! Thank you for stopping by!!

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      Susan Haze 5 years ago from Sunny Florida

      As always your write a beautiful tribute to love. Up and awesome.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      KoffeeKlatch Gals thank you, I always appreciate a visit from you and a lovely comment too.

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      prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

      What a beautiful hub from you. My friend, you never disappointed me. I always find the glitter of gemstone in every of your hubs. You are such of "treasure' here on HubPages. Good job as always. Vote up (awesome, beautiful, interesting).

      Prasetio

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      Johnny 5 years ago

      I still write a lot believe me. I don't know if you have FB but I am there. Poorer maybe my heart knowing that there is so much going on in the vastness of this little realm of love. Subtlety is not my strongest attribute but i am trying.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Prasetio, your words are totally awesome and I am always so completely delighted by your visit to one of my hubs. Thank you so very much.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Johnny I am so pleased that you still write a lot. Your words are always written from your heart and I can relate to that very much. No I am not on Facebook but maybe I should check it out. Epigramman suggested that I joined FB and I confess that I have done nothing about it at the moment.

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      Johnny 5 years ago

      It is much more than the living the words written in the blood beating through me, but the depth in which I feel each letter inside. I don't think you'd like FB, I don't. It is the only place I have for now. Like a ghost I move in and through different areas daily. As always it is a pleasure to see the love you have.

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      Audrey Hunt 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Only one who possesses such love could write this beautifully. I totally agree with Vincents words and I loved your introduction, especially this: " This husband of mine brightens every cell in my body..." That - my lovely hub friend says it all!

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      Twilight Lawns 5 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

      acaetnna, when I feel tired and jaded, or my relationship seems to be going wrong, or has stalled, I go over to your hubs and read some of your poems, and then I feel everything is going to be all right.

      Your pure optimism and joy in your love buoys me up.

      Thank you.

      And I wholeheartedly agree with vocal coach when she says: "This husband of mine brightens every cell in my body..." That is just the icing on the cake.

      Thank you again.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Johnny try not to be a ghost forever, we all want to see and read your wonderful words!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      You are so generous with your comments Vocalcoach and I very much appreciate them. Writing, I think, for me anyway is so much easier when the content is experienced in reality.

      I have been so busy of late and HubPages has been put on the back burner for a while but I shall be over to check out more of your hubs again very shortly.

      Have a great day.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Twilight Lawns you are so lovely. I am pleased that I can cheer you up when you pop over to my hubs, that is simply awesome and brightens my day.

      I always appreciate you stopping by, thank you.

      I hope you are well and enjoying this fabulous weather in the UK!

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      sofs 5 years ago

      Brilliantly happy sunbeam! Lovely emotions there.. beautifully expressed! Have a great day! God Bless!

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      I agree with Twilight Lawns. Your poems always remind me just how precious love is, just how much my partner means to me. Thank you for sending us this beautiful sunbeam acaetnna.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Sofs, I am a happy sunbeam and everyone should feel like this. We all deserve to!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Rosemary, thank you. Love is so absolutely precious and I am so pleased that you have a love like mine.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      AC... what a wonderful hub.. i am so glad that I came to return the reading favor.. I was pleasantly surprised bless you :) Frank

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ..and you are the brightest sunbeam of all Miss S ....

      ...the invite is still there for you and always will be for you to join our FB group LET'S JUST TALK MUSIC OR CINEMA ....lake erie time 5:10pm and sending you warm wishes and good energy - thank you for all of your love and support and friendship - I just received a notice for over 100,000 views ...

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      Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

      Hi, such a lovely poem, you are so lucky to have such love, voted up all the way!

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      samiaali 5 years ago

      As always acaetnna, Your words are absolutely beautiful! :)

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      Elena 5 years ago from London, UK

      Absolutely beautiful to read, as usual - Acaetnna. You have a gift for spreading and planting the seeds of True Love.

      Have a wonderful Weekend. :-)

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Frank, I am really pleased that you stopped by! Thank you again.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Ah thank you Epi. Yes I must get around to belonging to Facebook - I really should I know. Thank you for the invite. Lots of love my friend. xx

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Nell, yes I really appreciate just how lucky I am - but then so is he!!!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Nell, I always appreciate a visit from you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Ah Samiaali, thank you, you are so lovely.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Lady_E thank you, so are so very kind. Have a wonderful Easter weekend.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Just beautiful!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much AudreyHowitt.

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      Annette Donaldson 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

      Hunnie from a heart filled with love, your words rolled onto the paper like butter melting on asparagus tips. Beautifully and sensually written. You always know how to extract the true meaning in your poetry, and this attempt is no exception. Just stunning. Net:)

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow Thebluestar what wonderful comments. Like butter melting on asparagus tips - sounds delicious. May just serve them tonight for my husband and I to enjoy. Have a great Easter weekend and thank you so very much for visiting.

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      Maria Jordan 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      acaetnna--

      Such a pure and beautiful love... may you always treasure each other the way you do today. You have a radiant glow that showers hope around you.

      Voted UP & Beautiful. Hugs, Maria

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      January Moon 5 years ago from NY, Now Living in Atlanta Ga

      Such a touching hub:-) voted up for being lovely.

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      Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

      So beautiful-reads like a Hallmark Romance card. I've said it before and I'll say it again: your poetry belongs inside greeting cards. You really need to contact one of the companies, seriously, girl!

      How wonderful for you and your loving relationship. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up, awesome and beautiful! You expressed true love so wonderfully. Made me think of my husband and me cause we're soul mates.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Profound and heartfelt. Wonder choice of expressions.

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      Beautiful piece acetnna. Love it :)

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      Audrey Hunt 5 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Hello dear one ~ I'm linking your poem in my new hub "Words that penetrate the human soul." Thanks again for writing such beautiful words.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much for your lovely comment Marcoujor. Our love is so beautiful, we know we are fortunate and we are complete soul mates.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Cherrycrime26, that was so kind of you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Denise you really are so wonderful, do you really think that my work is good enough. You have said this many times so maybe I really should 'give it a go'! Thank you as always.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Gypsy Rose Lee. I am so pleased that your husband and you are soul mates. It rarely seems to happen these days. We are truly blessed. Thank you so much for stopping by.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      How awesome Vinaya Ghimire, thank you so much for your visit and comment.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Ruchira, thank you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Vocalcoach, thank you. How completely awesome is that. I shall be over to read your latest poem straight away. You know of course that I love your hubs and would been over to read them regardless of you giving a link. Thank you so much once again.

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      The Jet 5 years ago from The Bay

      That was splendid to read!

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      agaglia 5 years ago

      acaetnna, well, I see you are smitten. Great words for a loved man. I hope he appreciates the poet in you. I know I do. Great job.

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      the gift of true love is yours and with every poem you share, you inspire others to reach for the same peaks of happiness. A truly beautiful gift...

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you - The Jet - I so appreciate your visit. I have been really tied up the last few days - oh how wonderful love is!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hi Agaglia - yes I am completely smitten. He doesn't actually know that I am on HubPages but think he will be proud when he finds out. He is an amazing writer and poet and I have tried to give him another reason to be proud of me! Thank you so much for your visit, I so appreciate it.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Nighthag, I am delighted to see you here, thank you. Your words are always so very kind.

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      girltalksshop 5 years ago

      Very pretty, heartfelt poetry. : ) voted up and beautiful.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Girltalksshop - wow thank you!

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      Maurice Wisdom Bishop 4 years ago from San Tan Valley

      That was the most passionate love poem I've ever read and the photos you posted were just right. Awesome Write! Much Love and Respect.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow - Wisdom25 - this is one of the most awesome comments that I have ever received! Thank youso very much!!

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      Your poetry is lovely. acaetnna, and the photos you selected could not be more perfect. Thank you for this lilting treat which feels like it should be put to music.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Was by here and thought I left a comment, must have forgotten to send. Sorry. Very good as always. Fantastic photos too.

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      RedElf 4 years ago from Canada

      Beautiful photos and eloquent words. You are blessed indeed to have such love in your life.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Drbj - thank you so much. I have not been around for a while and it was a treat to read a comment from you - the first of many. Thank you.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Awesome - tha you Jackie. I have been tied up recently and have only just made it back here at HubPages. Thank you for your visit and comment.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you. The love of my life is here to stay and will always be. Thank you for your visit and comment - very much appreciated, thank you.

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      Martie Coetser 4 years ago from South Africa

      Really awesome, acaetnna! And so true - 'When you find such a love you walk ten feet tall!'

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow MartieCoetser - how awesome - thank you, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Martie you are awesome - thank you xx

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      Absolutely gorgeous Poem, Acaetnna. Totally enjoyed it.

      You are a lucky lady and he is even more luckier.... :-)

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Hi Lady_E, I have been rather pre-occupied recently, for a wonderful reason! Thank you so much for the visit and great comment as always. I am so grateful for the love that I share. Shall be over to check out your hubs as soon as I am able to.

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      pennyofheaven 4 years ago from New Zealand

      You are an angel of love and expresses your love through such magical words that are simply unique, deep and meaningful. Very soulful. Thanks for sharing.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Pennyofheaven - your comments are always so uplifting and truly amazing - thank you.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      very nice visualization through words. thank you

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Hi Mhatter99, thank you so much.

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      rOBERT hEWETT SR. 4 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Outstanding, two hearts beating in tune, what more could one ask for in life. I have a poem on my page titled Dance With Me Darling to The Music Tonight that carrries the same message. You have wonderful imagery, feeling and flow in your writing.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Hi Robert - thank you for your visits and comment. I shall be over to check out your hub shortly.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      What a brilliant piece of writing to read in this morning, here in Kathmandu.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Vinaya Ghimire - wow - thank you.

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      Christina M. Castro 4 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

      Beautiful! It is nice to meet another poet here. :)

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you poet CMCastro, I appreciate you stopping by.

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      Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas

      So descriptive of a loving relationship. If love is truly a beam of sunlight, you most certainly describe the dust floating in that beam of light. We love we desire and relationships work because we understand each others needs. Good write! ~WB

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you Wayne, you are so very kind.

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      agaglia 4 years ago

      Nice poem. Love the pictures - they go so well with the sentiment of the poem. Great job.

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