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Angel Of My Heart : An inspirational love poem

Updated on September 13, 2014
Photo Taken at Walindi Resort  in Kimbe
Photo Taken at Walindi Resort in Kimbe | Source

I have seen the worst

i have been the worst

My life was wild and reckless

Nothing mattered to me

Only my heart beat

I just needed to run and fight

I tasted blood on my lips

Got crushed in heart






Those were my days

Turbulent and violent

I was young and wild and free

With loose shaggy pants and rugged voice

Set me free darling- I prayed one day

With weary eyes, torn and broken I came



Until I met you

My life was a bottle of whisky smashed on a lost higway

I drank rum with the angels

And the saints sang me lullaby to sleep

I dreamt about the daugher of devil himself

That was my life

From the east to the west

I flew with the Mary Jane

I never needed any one

Not a face less sinner or a righteous saint

All I needed was you

to set me free from this chains

Set me free from this pain that burdens my heart so deeply

I prayed, I cried and I died

But when I woke up

I woke up I heaven

I saw for the first time a real angel

The angel of my heart

That is YOU

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      dadibobs 5 years ago from Manchester, England

      Very insightful, you really convey your sentiment across. Lovely poem.

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      dadibobs Thanks so much. Sometimes it takes so much pain to get out of a life one lives. It's a reflection of my life during my younger days. Teens mostly. Thanks for the comments.

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      This is beautiful, thanks for sharing and I wish you a very Happy New Year.

      Eddy.

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      jblais1122@aol 5 years ago from Kansas City, Missouri, USA

      Well done, voted up.

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      ExoticHippieQueen 5 years ago

      Totally love this! You laid your words out like a beautiful railroad track made of imagery. Voted up and awesome.....

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      Ian 5 years ago

      Hi jblais1122@aol

      Thank you so much for dropping by and commenting. I really appreciate your comments. I love poetry and find it a doorway to express my inner beauty and pain.

      Cheers.

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      ExoticHippieQueen. I love this name. By the way Happy New year to you and your family. Greeting from the Pacific to you.

      I Thanks for the wonderful comments you left here. Its a motivation for me to produce more of such a hub.

      My mind never stops working when it comes to poetry. Guess I have a contagious imagination. Should we call a Doc?. this young man needs therapy of some sort. Lolz. No don't. Not yet until I empty my mind then we call the Doc to come over to my residence for nothing.. hahahah. Cheers

      Ian

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      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      Very well woven. Like the choice of your words.

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      Cimone A Billue 5 years ago from Syracuse, New York

      Nice!

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Senoritaa and Cimone A Billue. Thanks for dropping by and commenting.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      great work, ian. I appreciate your honesty!

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      PDXKaraokeGuy

      Thanks man for commenting here. I really appreciate your wonderful comments ever since I joined HP and you know what. I watch my yahoo mail box every now and then to see your publication notification.... hahahah ah..Hey how about surfing and the sting ray issue? Well! we get to it some times sooner. Cheers bro.

      Ian.

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      femmeflashpoint 5 years ago

      Ian,

      Another captivating read! I love your description. It makes it easier for a non-poet to follow. :)

      femme

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      femmeflashpoint

      Thanks much. I don't follow formal poetry writing structures or those fancy literary styles that I believe squizes dry creative juice of poets. Thanks for liking my poem.

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      Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

      What a touching poem. This is beautiful. :)

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Thanks so much Denise. You such a wonderful friend. You are one in a million. I enjoy all your wonderful comments.

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Thrilling.. Mind blowing.. Interesting.. Wow!

      This is beautiful!.. Voted up all the way!

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      an, I'm pleased that you await my work! I've been really busy last few weeks, and haven't had as much time to read and comment!

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      Nick Gaga 5 years ago

      That awesome.I was moved and thrilled..great piece,exellent..wow voted up.

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