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Our World Is In A Mess

Updated on October 22, 2012

Our world is in a mess,

A horrible mess

Liars and Cheats prevail,

bad is now good,

No one it seems can curtail

the snowballing speed of bad

upon bad.

When will good overpower?

Only a dream for good to be winning

Everyone wants the sleaze and the sinning.

Our world is now a mess.

Animals try to  protect their young
Animals try to protect their young

Look at your baby with big laughing eyes,

Innocent at this moment,

Ignorant of his whole life ahead,

In this world that is such a mess.

Treasure these days when baby is young

Don´t trouble over diapers, or sleep deprivation,

You´ll soon want them back, when baby is boy,

beating off bullies,while trying to keep

integrity that you have instilled,

Disappointments, disillusions

You´ll soon see on his face

And wish you were looking at a smiling baby face.

No problems, the diapers, or crying at night.

Safe was he then in your care.

OH! To be back there!.

The world is a mess, a horrible mess,

What can we do to change it?

Each of us can in our own small way

Try to do something every day,

That helps and lifts up,

not drags down or bullies.

Sharing our strengths and let

others do same, gratefully taking on board

What they say.

Baby steps first, We may find a way.

But for now.......

This world´s in a mess.

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      Yes indeed my poetic friend. The world is in decay and the moral fiber is stripped as our children and grandchildren will sink even deeper as time slips blindly by. Respect has vanished, thugs kill in the streets, drive by shootings, drugs fed like venom to our kids. No one is safe, lock your doors like never before. There was a time when no locks were needed but not this day as law is blind.

      Our politicians are Reepers and care only for their own. Where will it all end? only our maker really knows. Keep the beast at bay for he howls in the night and wants to devour us whole, safety, freedoms and beliefs. Let's pray that PEACE and LOVE finds a way to heal the gaping wounds festering in our world today. Voted UP, awesome and interesting.

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      Cagsil 4 years ago from USA or America

      Hey Dim, you're right the world is in a mess and it has been for sometime now. The real shame is that there are simply too many people who are completely uneducated about the most simplistic understanding of living life and how each person's actions has an affect and effect on those in their surroundings. Very nicely written. :) Voted up! :)

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      Kathy 4 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

      Hi there my dear Dim...yes, I can see it and agree with you and your other commentors here...I am very disappointed in US...we have become selfish, vindictive, careless. Where did subtlety go? What happened to sensitivity, empathy and grace? We live in a culture riddled with "use or be used" mentality; where, sadly it seems, everyone is a 'mark' and those who are vulnerable or less calloused are bullied, walked over and thrown aside. We feed off weakness and do not seem to recognize gentleness; or, it appears, we no longer value morals. We degrade and abuse one another, treat others as if there is no value in life. Our culture is corrupted, politicians are out to be elected or re elected...they do not appear to care about their constituency as much as their own rise to power. Lieing is second nature and the art of manipulation and deceit has never been more refined. Deception is the operative motive; getting "away with it" the rule of the day...Or so it seems. I feel very sorry for very young children .... the world in which they grow will be quite ugly. Uglier...look at Syria, the Mid. East; our own country...loss of everything that should matter and replaced with ego, greed, anger and violence. Yikes! Got carried away here...but, "I read the news today, Oh Boy!!!"

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Hi Vincent, Thank you for such a beautiful comment.

      I was hoping I wouldn´t just depress everyone.

      Instead you wrote some wonderful words, right on my wavelength.

      Prayer helps. I don´t believe a real God od love will allow things to go on forever this way. There´d be no earth left woth living in andI can´t see HIM standing for that. Not after all the wonderful design in nature that He created.

      Thank you again for your comment.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Thank you Cagsil, your wise words always encourage me.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Lucky Cats. Thanks for your comment.

      It´s brilliant. You shoud write a hub on it!.

      Oh how true......Í read the news today, O boy!´

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Interesting Poem with a Powerful message!!!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      thank you very much. Pleased to meet you on hubpages

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      Angela Blair 4 years ago from Central Texas

      Astute observations and so genuinely and cleverly stated -- you definitely have an affinity for poetry! Best/Sis

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      You are too kind, Angela.

      Thank you so much for all your support.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      .......love when you write your poetic philosophy and put it into words which always sets you apart from other writers here at the Hub - l learn from you, I am inspired by you - you make me a better person and writer/poet also - lake erie time and sending you warm wishes and good energy 9:49am

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      mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      I cannot match the elegance of Lucky Cats comment. I can just agree.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Wow, Epi, I don´t think I´ve really seen myself as an inspiration to others. That is quite a compliment indeed.

      Especially coming from someone like you, you have such incredible imagination, it always a surprise reading your hubs. You pull something new out of the hat like no one else does.

      I´m so glad we met on hubpages. Thank you for all your lovely comments. (and cards on FB)

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Hi mckbirdbks.

      I appreciate what you say and am always happy that you come over to my page. Thank you.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      just checking in with you dear friend - as I know today is the opening day of the Olympics in London - are you excited about that and you are planing to attend any of the events or just sit at home at watch it on the tele ....

      lake erie time 12:14pm Friday and sending these warm thoughts to you as always

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      Suzette Walker suzettetaos 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      This is such a beautiful poem and the message is priceless. All we can do is our best to help the world a bit each day be a better place. The photos are so precious, especially the baby. What a treat to read this poem today!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Hi Epi . So sorry missed your message and this comment earlier.

      It´s 1.20. am now, just finished watching the 3 hour opening ceremony on t.v. I think we had the best view.!!!!It was amazing. Absolutely fabulous.

      I´m not interested in many sports. Tennis is the only one I get excited about. , However the Opening ceremony and the closing one, , All that hype and loud music. Love it. (from home.... 80,000 people a bit much for me these days. Take care. Thanks for keeping in touch.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Hi suzettenaples

      Thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment.

      Take care,

      Dim.

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      The lady speaks the truth and in a powerful way. Bravo and an important message and lovely poem.

      If you get a chance, you might want to check out my Monday hub; I do believe you will be mentioned. :)

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Thanks billybuc.

      I always appreciate your support.

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      poojasd7 4 years ago from India

      I was drawn to this hub by Billy's hub on his support from fellow-hubbers. Every sentence of this poetry strikes the chord with my thinking.

      Wonderful poem and deep yet poignant feelings. Kudos.

      Do check out my poem- Broken myths which is more or less on the similar lines.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

      I shall check out ´´ Broken myths´.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ...yes it's true at last check this world is still in a bloody mess - lol - and mostly it has to do with people but that said - as long as there are beautiful and delightful and talented and decent people like you around then you my dearest Dim of Flaxenwick will always rock my (hub) world ....big time !!!! lake erie time ontario canada 12:38pm sending good thoughts and good energy your way

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Ha Ha .... Yes Epi, It´s the people every time We have a beautiful earth with some beautiful people in it.

      I am so honoured to have you as a hubfriend. You are so encouraging about my work, when it is you who is the genius.

      Hope you are still very happy.

      Take care. Dim

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      Nat Amaral 4 years ago from BC Canada

      A beautiful poem. Very sad as well because it's true. However, there is some light in this world. Like families and such. Yet we can always do the best we can in even the harshest of situations. Very well written.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Thank you so much. I am happy you liked it even though it reminds us of the calamities around us.

      As you say if we can all do a little good., the world would be a better place.

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