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Scrolling Down

Updated on March 3, 2011

Scrolling Down

I saw the title of a hub and it had a really good hook

It looked interesting stuff so i thought i'd take a look.

 

The whole article had a really good feel

Some of it was fantasy. Some of it was real.

 

I thought it was among the best things i had ever read

A lot of feelings were going through my head.

 

I voted up, and said it was awesome, beautiful, useful and funny

If it was available i would have given it some money.

 

I started to read some comments- a few said it was unique.

One fashionable reader even said it was 'tres chic'.

 

A few minutes reading the comments and i still hadn't finished.

The compliments were flowing- they were in no way diminished.

 

A few minutes later and i kept on going

The comments of high praise were still showing.

 

I wanted to leave a comment myself but there was no end in sight

At this rate i thought i'll be here all night.

 

After a few minutes i just scrolled down

I was going to read all the comments but darkness was coming around.

 

I had seen Hubs with a lot of comments but this was much bigger

This really was one mighty figure.

 

The comments it got really were mounting

Ten thousand four hundred and two and still counting.

 

I left my own words, saying how good i thought it was

Before leaving this Hub i had a bit of a pause.

 

I just thought i don't know if or when

Something will be as celebrated again.

 

 

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    • katiem2 profile image

      katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

      Awesome and oh so true! Love scrolling down, but rest assured your work is certain to be read start to finish! :) Katie

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Ha Ha Katie, Love the comment. Thanks again for coming on for a read and for this comment.

      Michael.

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      Michael Ely, I'm sure we're all saying, "I wish it were mine"! Good Poem of fun on this subject...and Katlem2 is so right...Thanks for sharing these thoughts!

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      kirutaye 6 years ago from London, UK

      Lol... I like your sense of humour and you've got a lovely hub too. Well done. :o))

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      Christina Lornemark 6 years ago from Sweden

      I have also come across one of those hubs and it is amazing how the comments seems to go on forever. But I always scroll down anyway:) Sometimes I think that all have been said in the previous comments and there is nothing new to add! I like this poem very much.True, funny, awesome!

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Hi b. Malin, Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on this Hub. Michael.

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Hi kirutaye, Nice to see you on here again. Thanks a lot for the comment. Michael.

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Hi thoughtforce, Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on this Hub. Much appreciated. Michael.

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      Ashantina 6 years ago

      ahh.. a celebration of the celebrated!

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Hi Ashantina, Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on this Hub. Cheers. Michael.

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      vietnamvet68 6 years ago from New York State

      yes the celebration once you get to the end of the line. We all love to scroll down but sometimes it takes to long so you just move right along. Great write, loved this piece.

      God Bless

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Hi vietnamvet68, Thanks a lot for your comments. Much appreciated.

      Michael.

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      Genna East 6 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      This is really cool; delightful read, and I know what you mean about the scroll down. :)

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Hi Genna East, Thanks a lot for reading this Hub and commenting here.

      Cheers. Michael.

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      toknowinfo 6 years ago

      Really enjoyable poem. It is worthy of being celebrated by so many comments too. Hope that happens for you. Rated up and awesome.

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Hi toknowinfo, Thanks a lot for reading and commenting on this Hub. Much appreciated.

      Michael.

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      CheyenneAutumn 6 years ago

      Michael - this was great - we do love the comments don't we. Scrolling down to read every last word on a thought, seeing if someone capruted what was on our minds when we began. I like this very much Michael.

      Be well my friend!

      Laurie

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      michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

      Thanks a lot for your comments here Laurie. I'm glad you liked it.

      Michael.

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