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Would You Fall With Me?

Updated on August 8, 2012



Will you fall in love with me



would you try to come with me

to that other side of your life



where we can get the best as



we put away that hindrance





will you follow me to that cliff



where we can reach ourselves



would you dare to jump with me



until you reach the key to my heart 


would you come huddle close to me



catching my eyes, that want to say so much





would you get the best out of me



as soon as we get our lips close and tight



wiping away tears and dust from the past






would you join me in a new direction



not just words of infatuation



will you finally take me in your arms



kneeling down to your life and hear our hearts beat as one



holding ieach one amongst tears of joy



Would you be mine my sweet swan



until the very end of times...



will you fall again for me



being there and not wasting your time


would you open your eyes as I take you


inside that room of subtle desperation



Do you see those dozen Roses?


they reflect a symbol of my own causes



taking awya any fear...



Caresssing that face full of tears



Will you fall in love again


lets your lips to express you feelings. Oh dear!




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  • Lord De Cross profile image
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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi Jackie Lynnley,

    This oldie was written with some strong feelings from within, there was no other way. Thanks for your kind words and your support.

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    Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

    Words I might have written myself with deep meaning from a lovers heart, very good.

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Hello Fpherj48,

    Thanks for your fun comments, seems that someone told you about us! Lol! Nicw to hear from you! Glad to hear about butterflies and sweet feelings!

    LORD

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    Paula 6 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

    Ahhhhhh...sigh.....my heart sings. You bring out the butterflies in me.

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Chrisam01,

    You are such a wonderful woman that appreciate our love for writing and we thank you bunches for commenting!'

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Hi molometer!

    Sorry for the lateness friend! You are right. The pic was chosen and then we did work around the title..and all came out to pass. Will be checking your hubs also. Thanks!

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Thanks audrey!,,you are so kind!! Is just inspiration from the heart..just to let ourselves know that we still have hope in Love. Thanks again!

    LORD

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    chrisam01 6 years ago from Los Angeles, California, USA

    A great ode to love. Nicely done!

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    lol! Phyllis!! Easy on us! dear!

    LOVELY WAS to see you here.. with that young heart of yours. Thanks for the compliments!! Take care!

    LORD

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    Phyllis Doyle Burns 6 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

    Lovely! Absolutely lovely and deeply touching.

    UP and Beautiful (no lovely button?)

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    molometer 6 years ago from United Kingdom

    Great sentiments and nicely done. We all want to take that jump and sometimes we actually do. voted up Lord de

    like the typeface too very effective.

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    Audrey Howitt 6 years ago from California

    Wow--so romantic! Bravo!

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Hi Deborah!

    Thanks for your comments, nice to meet you in here...Yeah! as you can see, this piece of poetry draw quite a few comments. Thanks again hubber friend

    LORD

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    Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

    this is so beautiful... such a romantic poem... I am so drawn in... I voted up and beautiful... BRAVO..

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Hi hattieMattieMae,

    Coming from you, this writer friend feels flattered beyond rational explanation. See you next time..and keep hubbing!

    LORD

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    HattieMattieMae 6 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

    Very lovely poem! :)

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Hello Sunny!

    thanks for commenting on this poem. Was away for a while working on little projects and don't think or assume i'm just avoiding my friends. Have wonderful weekend and be blessed,

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Thanks Cindy10,

    First time I hear from you and the object of my inspiration is Life nad experience. Hope to comment on your work too. Take care and have a nice day.

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Hi frank! Well love is there for us to take care of. If You don't want to fall with her or the object of your Loving! Then you can fall somehwere else...Women know by sight what are your intentions really are. Well, I know you were just fooling around.

    LORD

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    Sunnie Day 6 years ago

    Such a romantic and lovely poem...moments to savor forever..

    Thank you,

    Sunnie

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    Cynthia B Turner 6 years ago from Georgia

    Such a sweet poem. The object of your true love must be very lucky. Keep up the great writing.

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    Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

    You are a wind of creativity.. but would I fall.. easy Hell No... bitch gotta make that jump all by herself.. but I will wave as she goes down.. :) Up and Fantastic! Lord

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    iCCIEV,

    Seems that you appeal to our creativity. therefore you are very romantic and know what you want..and know how to share. Thanks again my friend. You are always welcome

    Lord

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Hi Nicole,

    Nice to hear from you again. This emotions is executable in the best way and you said it right being a woman. From your point of view, actually makes more sense. Thakns again for your important comments.

    LORD

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    icciev 6 years ago from Kuwait

    I Guess you are not talking to me - I am white! Just kidding. nice peom, voted up

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    Nicole 75 6 years ago

    Well written and executed the emotion of love.

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Thanks Mary!

    You are also inspiring. We all come here witha purpose and we get our own personal reward..right? have a nice evening dear..!

    LORD

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    Mary Hyatt 6 years ago from Florida

    You have proven once more that you are a terrific writer. You inspire me. Keep up the good work!

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    NaturalSolutions,

    Is just inspiration and a little of good luck that strike against my heart and bounce back into the written Poem. thanks for your comment..!

    LORD

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    naturalsolutions 6 years ago

    This poem is full of love and romantic words. I am pretty sure that the girl who inspires you is the best girl you could ever have. Writing all your feelings are not easy, but you did it.

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Hey Mottiandbander,

    Thanks a lot for stopping by...Luckily Sivester didn't have enough luck with you. Lol! Take care!

    LORD

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    mottiandbander 6 years ago from Chd

    True love never defeats..... best of luck

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    KAWALJIT,

    I APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENTS//THANKS

    LORD

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    Kawaljit kaur 6 years ago from JALANDHAR, Punjab (India)

    it is so beautiful........

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Thanks so much! EParis! Nice to read you too

    lord

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    Eparisi679 6 years ago from Maryland

    This made me tear up...so beautiful

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    BetahnyLynn,

    You are right! we come to a relationship with our own load...and if we think we found our best half or think we can start fresh in any action to be taken, then we already won 50% of that battle. Thanks for your touching comment...is been a pleasure to share this poem..that like AEvans said...came straight from our heart.

    LORD

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    BethanyLynn211 6 years ago from Bangor, Pa

    Beautiful poem. "Wiping away tears and dust from the past" favorite line. I think we've all been in a situation where we want to do just that and start anew. Whether it be with a love or a person wanted a fresh start with oneself. Voted up and beautiful

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    Julianna 6 years ago from SomeWhere Out There

    Embrace them as they embrace you. :)

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    HI terri,

    I don't have words someitmes to express my gratitude to freinds like you who encourage ths human being...Thanks so much again!

    lord

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    Terishere 6 years ago

    A truly beautiful love poem!! It speaks to the heart of many...

    Great work Lord!

    Terri

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    AEVANS,

    You should know better...love is so complex...it would take a thousand years to match male and females on the same scale... No wonder is so hard to find your better half.

    LORD

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    RJ,

    lADIES first, and thank s so much for your words...sincerely i cannot express my appreciation with words...you just said nicely, and I feel flatered

    LORD

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    Julianna 6 years ago from SomeWhere Out There

    You are so inspirational and such a romantic. Beautiful words taken straight from the heart and onto paper. :)

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    tHANKS again AEVANS

    Inspiration knocks the door...and the rest come together. Love comes in so many ways! and feelings..and colors

    LORD

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    Julianna 6 years ago from SomeWhere Out There

    Beautiful and so touching! Awwww.... It is breathtaking! :)Loved the hub!:)

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    Reynold Jay 6 years ago from Saginaw, Michigan

    True love--there is nothing quite like and it is expressed beautifully here. I write romance novels too. I found I enjoyed this very much. You have this laid out beautifully and it is easy to understand. Keep up the great HUBS. I must give this an “Up ONE and awesome.” I'm always your fan! RJ

    Based upon your HUB, you might enjoy this HUB…

    https://hubpages.com/education/Ben-takes-a-Quantum...

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    You are welcome exotic HQ. Glad you enjoyed it.

    LORD

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    ExoticHippieQueen 6 years ago

    Ah, true love....."my pretty white swan." Beautiful!

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Did you HEAR ME?,

    Appreciate your comments, being a woman, and when a woman talks, we men shut our mouth out of respect. Why don't we go back to those simple romantic moments that our parents so dearly adored?

    LORD

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    maridax 6 years ago from North Central Arkansas,USA

    So powerful and beautiful. That and a dozen roses would bring tears of joy to my eyes. Romantic and moving!

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    Hear Me 6 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

    Very beautiful and romantic poem. Well written.