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Your Voice - A Poem
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Your Voice
(This poem is for my friends who are all ready to encourage me and lift me up when my knees wobble and can hardly keep up the struggles of life. Thank you all for lighting my path.)
Such a sweet voice
Those unheard of
Bringing melodies to my ears
Soothing my frayed nerves
Allaying my fears
I want to remain
In that state
To hear it
Over and over again
Reclaiming my lost self
Wandering through the maze
Of thistroubledworld
And there you are
Letting your voice
Be heard
Beyond this confusion
Offering a piece
Of yourself
And much more
Your Love…
When I want to sleep
Your voice keeps me awake
Nudging me to go on
Life is worth living
Because of the sweetest voice
I’ve heard…
All Rights Reserved raciniwa, April 24, 2012...
Comments
Raci, that was very beautiful! You are a kind and talented woman and I am honored to be your friend.
bill
such good friends!!
raci, when ever you need me i am here for you. you have always been there for me, one of my most loyal supporters always there with a kind and thoughtful comment . you are so special
Love
Michael
Nice na Mam Raci , mao na Song sa ako anak sa School ........... :) Congrats ko nimo ....... you are so speacial :) friend .....
Such a fantastic feeling to know you have such friends by your side who protect you in such a way as you have mentioned!
Beautiful poem!
:)
Rahul
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and the pleasure is mine billy...you're such an inspiration to me...God bless...
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thank you for visiting yaj...
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Hello Michael...you are such a great ally too for me when i need a shoulder to lean on...love u always...
Raci
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Hello mate Liezel...it's always a pleasure sharing my inspiration to you...thank you for visiting...
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Hello rahul!!!and you are one of them...your presence is always appreciated...thank you...
Aww.... THANK YOU :)
This is so heartfelt Raci..That's what friends are for. Having your friendship brightens my day..Thank you..
What a gentle and loving soul you are--I am reminded of that every time I read your work--beautiful!
Such a strong poem, this is everything a friend/significant other should be. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.
Very beautiful Raciniwa!
Raci.. you rock!
Such encouraging words, racin. You are lucky to hear such voices in your life...voted up indeed.
raciniwa, very gentle, delicate and giving. Thank you.
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rahul...:-)
Ruby...yes, i am always blessed by your friendship...thank you
Audrey...and you always remind me that life is beautiful and meaningful...
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caroline...thank you for the uplifting words...
Frank...you too do rock...thanks...
Ruchira...and i am lucky too to hear those encouraging voice from you...thank you...
ytsenoh...thank you as always for the support...
Beautiful poem. You are so talented and share so many insights. A lovely read in tribute to your friends.
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thank you Cyndi for dropping by, yes life becomes meaningful because of true friends...
Wonderful writing, heartfelt words.
Hi Raciniwa
Absolutely beautiful.
Voted up and away.
Take care :)
This is such a beautiful poem, joyce.
Voted up and awesome.
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thank you xstatic for your wonderful comment too...have a great day!!!
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Hello Sueswan! thank you for visiting and the vote of confidence...take care too...
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Hello Joyce! it's so nice of you to drop by...thank you for the visiting...have a pleasant day!
I particularly love your dark poetry, but also enjoy when you write about hope.
This is lovely.
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thank you for the kind words Vinaya...my poems come with my moods...
Such a lovely way to look at life and those who keep you focus on your love for it all, awesomely written poetry here Raciniwa, and thanks for adding me to your FB, chat with ya soon. Voted up!
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hello Mike...thank you for visiting...that's how God wants us to be...to love His children...that is our call...have a great day!!!
Wonderful feelings and sentiments rolling onto the page here. You write so well. I am happy to be a new fan. :)
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hello Jane...thank you for visiting, hope you have a great time reading...my poems go with my emotions...
extravagantly beautiful! The feelings in this poem are very powerful, the words flow nicely and enhances the feelings you give. Well done :) Voted Up
You have friends there whom you can really call friends... :) Blessed girl that you are.. Listen to the voice of encouragement and live every moment of this life bringing purpose to it. Have a blessed day!
Raci, we all need a friend lending us ears and holding our hands. This is a wonderful tribute letting them know how thankful you are. This is simply beautiful. Thank you.
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i consider all people in my circle friends shim, whether i meet them or not, for friendship is not measured by distance but on how he/she cares...thank you for being one...Peace...
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hello onlooker...yes, thank you for your tribute too...visiting my hub and leaving a delightful comment...have a great day...
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hello Barry! thank you for leaving a wonderful comment...have a fruitful day!!!take care always...
Great..wonderful poem and i love it....
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hello motti...thanks for visiting and leaving a wonderful comment...have a great day!!!
Beautifully said, Raci ( can I call you that?) like you I do thrive on those supportive and always giving voices that guide us through darkness . Your poem captures the value of such unconditional support so well. Voted up, of course.
Where would we be without our friends ... Beautiful poem!
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hello Docmo...yes, you can...i prefer to be called by that name...and yes, likewise i always follow the guidance of the higher spirit...if the world is too noisy for me, i stop and listen for a while...thank you for sharing your insight...
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you are right there Susan...friends are great...thank you for visiting...
nice comment by Cleaner 3 - a true gentleman - and yes you have always supported me as well my dear beautiful friend and as you know there is only one Epi-man - lol - but more importantly there is only one RACINIWA and you are a world class writer, humanitarian, friend to all here at the Hub and a first class lady in my humble book - don't ever change for you are awesome the way you are - and sending you warm wishes and good thoughts from lake erie canada 6:35am
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uh, uh...coming from you i am blushing and gushing all over...what a great way to say to me Colin...and because of that my undying gratitude and love...thank you so much for the support...
raciniwa you have a great poem here, i have to share this. Thanks
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oh, thank you dwachira, have a great time...bless you...
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