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The Girl With Most Beautiful Eyes (poem)

Updated on March 19, 2013

Eyes, windows to the soul (poem)

There is a beautiful girl, who is really a woman

Her skin is like porcelain, her hair shines like copper

But nothing compares to her eyes.!

This beautiful girl has seen too much life

too much for someone so young

Yet nowhere and never does bitterness show

A sparkle just comes from her eyes.

And nothing compares to those eyes.

She's mothered her brothers when they were all little,

she's mothered her own mum at times.

Yet never complains, Her heart keeps on giving

and love shines from those beautiful eyes.

Are the green , are they blue? I often can't tell,

Just like the ocean that shimmers and shines

but always a wonderful sight.

So this beautiful girl who ,, when things are tough

is a rock -- not one who takes flight.

She looks like a dream of feminine beauty

yet inside is solid and wise.

My girl with the beautiful eyes.

(For BBG)xxxxxx

most beautiful eyes

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    What a wonderful comment. Thank you so much.

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    Cathy Nerujen 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

    Wow, a gem of writing from you, Dim. Just lovely and so love-positive in so many ways. The eyes are the windows to the human soul. Your writing is always so well worth reading. Glad I found this hub. :)

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you, Ravindra.

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    Ravindra Dwivedi 4 years ago

    awesome poem (*_*)

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Beautiful, poetic comment, thank you so much.

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    cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

    very nice madam,

    your poetry is fine

    like a good wine

    i could drink it up

    and not have enough

    of this cool stuff.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

    Bless you. You´re very kind

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    Lady_Tenaz 6 years ago

    had to re-read this one again! lovely

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    Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

    Welcome to my page, Mahendra.

    Hope your computer feels better soon.

    Thank you for the lovely comment.

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    Mahendra 6 years ago

    awesome

    MTECH COMPUTER

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    Mahendra 6 years ago

    its beuatiful

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    OWAIS_ 6 years ago

    This was so lovely.....I had to read it as soon as I saw the title it really caught my interest. Beautiful1qws...

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    Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

    Thanks you for gracing my page, Sir.

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    MrDSpade2 6 years ago

    No what i would say is, this is a hub of..... Damitt dark, man you said my line, great insightful hub though, Dim Flaxenwick...

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    Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

    that´s very kind of you,. Thank you.

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    DarkDisOrder 6 years ago from B.A.D. (Beyond All Dimensions)

    A hub of exquisite nature and emotion, well written, as my counterpart, spade would say...

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you 2uesday. She IS wonderful.

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    2uesday 7 years ago

    She sounds wonderful, it is lovely that she can keep this and know the way you feel.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you all for your kind words.

    It makes me happy to know others enjoyed reading . x

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    lxxy 7 years ago from Beneath, Between, Beyond

    Awesome sauce! Loved this, (thanks to Kim gray for sharing on FB!) Ever so beautiful. :) I love staring into Kari's eyes..I could get lost in them forever.

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    kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

    I am speechless

    more than you know

    thank you

    thank you

    kimbely

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Hello Pachuca213, Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it.

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    Pachuca213 7 years ago

    This was so lovely.....I had to read it as soon as I saw the title it really caught my interest. Beautiful!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    thanks poetloraine. I also have load of catching up to do. I get to Britain on Wednesday but it´s anyone´s guess when our computer and all other belongings will arrive.

    I´m so , so looking forward to catching up with everyone.

    Hope hings are ging ok for you.

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    poetlorraine 7 years ago

    That was such a lovely tribute., catching up at last and managing to read some hubs today, loved this

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    O micky.! You crack me up. You are so funny. How can you ever think you are "not alive?"

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    A toast to BBG. You know I have beautiful eyes. Of course you know how women are- they're always looking at something else and I have to say-"hey, my eyes are up here lady!" They're just animals!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you very much M M . I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. It's always encouraging.

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    Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

    Wonderful, simply wonderful - loved it very much...

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thanks, Justine.

    She really does have the most incredible eyes. She's gorgeous. I'm biased. She's my grandaughter.

    Many years were not easy for her since my son and her mum divorced., but I swear every word is true of her in that poem. I'm so glad you liked it, because I love your work so much. I'm alittle better today., I hope you are too. xx

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    Justine76 7 years ago

    oh, how lovely. How could she not know how special she is to you, after reading this? I especially liked..." This beautiful girl has seen too much life

    too much for someone so young

    Yet nowhere and never does bitterness show"

    what a wonderful trait.

    xo

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you for that, . You are very encouraging. Take care.

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    ButterflyWings 7 years ago

    So beautiful. Dare to call yourself a poet.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    And not always easy these days, eh? Thanks for your comment

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    tantrum 7 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

    what a lovely poem! It's great when mother and daughter stick together ! :)

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    thank you blaise, the subject is well worth my little tribute to her.

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    Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

    ah, beautiful eyes..my weakness as always ;)

    lovely poem, Dim! great tribute

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you James.One day I hope to 'dare' to call myself a poet. peace.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you Tony,. I hope she realises how special she is too.

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    Tony McGregor 7 years ago from South Africa

    Lovely tribute, thanks for sharing it. I hope the subject feels special!

    Love and peace

    Tony

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you tenblogger. Not all teenagers appreciate their mums. do they? It's good to know millions of them do. Thanks for commenting.

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    James A Watkins 7 years ago from Chicago

    Excellent poetry. Thank you. This is quite enjoyable.

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    Ten Blogger 7 years ago

    oh.. what a nice one.. I specially like the line "she's mothered her own mum at times" I know that happens in lot of families. New .. smart generation is one step ahead.