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The Girl With Most Beautiful Eyes (poem)
Eyes, windows to the soul (poem)
There is a beautiful girl, who is really a woman
Her skin is like porcelain, her hair shines like copper
But nothing compares to her eyes.!
This beautiful girl has seen too much life
too much for someone so young
Yet nowhere and never does bitterness show
A sparkle just comes from her eyes.
And nothing compares to those eyes.
She's mothered her brothers when they were all little,
she's mothered her own mum at times.
Yet never complains, Her heart keeps on giving
and love shines from those beautiful eyes.
Are the green , are they blue? I often can't tell,
Just like the ocean that shimmers and shines
but always a wonderful sight.
So this beautiful girl who ,, when things are tough
is a rock -- not one who takes flight.
She looks like a dream of feminine beauty
yet inside is solid and wise.
My girl with the beautiful eyes.
(For BBG)xxxxxx
most beautiful eyes
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Comments
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What a wonderful comment. Thank you so much.
Wow, a gem of writing from you, Dim. Just lovely and so love-positive in so many ways. The eyes are the windows to the human soul. Your writing is always so well worth reading. Glad I found this hub. :)
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Thank you, Ravindra.
awesome poem (*_*)
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Beautiful, poetic comment, thank you so much.
very nice madam,
your poetry is fine
like a good wine
i could drink it up
and not have enough
of this cool stuff.
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Bless you. You´re very kind
had to re-read this one again! lovely
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Welcome to my page, Mahendra.
Hope your computer feels better soon.
Thank you for the lovely comment.
awesome
MTECH COMPUTER
its beuatiful
This was so lovely.....I had to read it as soon as I saw the title it really caught my interest. Beautiful1qws...
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Thanks you for gracing my page, Sir.
No what i would say is, this is a hub of..... Damitt dark, man you said my line, great insightful hub though, Dim Flaxenwick...
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that´s very kind of you,. Thank you.
A hub of exquisite nature and emotion, well written, as my counterpart, spade would say...
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Thank you 2uesday. She IS wonderful.
She sounds wonderful, it is lovely that she can keep this and know the way you feel.
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Thank you all for your kind words.
It makes me happy to know others enjoyed reading . x
Awesome sauce! Loved this, (thanks to Kim gray for sharing on FB!) Ever so beautiful. :) I love staring into Kari's eyes..I could get lost in them forever.
I am speechless
more than you know
thank you
thank you
kimbely
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Hello Pachuca213, Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it.
This was so lovely.....I had to read it as soon as I saw the title it really caught my interest. Beautiful!
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thanks poetloraine. I also have load of catching up to do. I get to Britain on Wednesday but it´s anyone´s guess when our computer and all other belongings will arrive.
I´m so , so looking forward to catching up with everyone.
Hope hings are ging ok for you.
That was such a lovely tribute., catching up at last and managing to read some hubs today, loved this
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O micky.! You crack me up. You are so funny. How can you ever think you are "not alive?"
A toast to BBG. You know I have beautiful eyes. Of course you know how women are- they're always looking at something else and I have to say-"hey, my eyes are up here lady!" They're just animals!
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Thank you very much M M . I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. It's always encouraging.
Wonderful, simply wonderful - loved it very much...
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Thanks, Justine.
She really does have the most incredible eyes. She's gorgeous. I'm biased. She's my grandaughter.
Many years were not easy for her since my son and her mum divorced., but I swear every word is true of her in that poem. I'm so glad you liked it, because I love your work so much. I'm alittle better today., I hope you are too. xx
oh, how lovely. How could she not know how special she is to you, after reading this? I especially liked..." This beautiful girl has seen too much life
too much for someone so young
Yet nowhere and never does bitterness show"
what a wonderful trait.
xo
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Thank you for that, . You are very encouraging. Take care.
So beautiful. Dare to call yourself a poet.
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And not always easy these days, eh? Thanks for your comment
what a lovely poem! It's great when mother and daughter stick together ! :)
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thank you blaise, the subject is well worth my little tribute to her.
ah, beautiful eyes..my weakness as always ;)
lovely poem, Dim! great tribute
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Thank you James.One day I hope to 'dare' to call myself a poet. peace.
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Thank you Tony,. I hope she realises how special she is too.
Lovely tribute, thanks for sharing it. I hope the subject feels special!
Love and peace
Tony
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Thank you tenblogger. Not all teenagers appreciate their mums. do they? It's good to know millions of them do. Thanks for commenting.
Excellent poetry. Thank you. This is quite enjoyable.
oh.. what a nice one.. I specially like the line "she's mothered her own mum at times" I know that happens in lot of families. New .. smart generation is one step ahead.
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