i loved her so much but she didn't care! m feeling exprs in poetic way

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    Sandeep241posted 4 years ago

    I saw a girl bold and beautiful,
    though her face was innocent but she was supercool.
    Her eyes wide open twinkles like a star,
    her voice so beautiful,sounds like a guitar.
    Oh! those long black hair soft and silky,
    her skin so soft smooth and milky.
    Everytime i see her infront of me,
    i question myself will she ever talk to me?
    My heart says yes but mind says no,
    which one to chose from,oh! God i really dont know.
    She may like me or may be not,
    but that won't make any difference to me,
    as i truly love her a lot.
    Many a times i tried to talk to her
    but never succeded as she still sees me as a stranger,
    All these thnigs continued for a year,
    i wanted to go a step ahead but could't dare,
    At last the same thing happened that i always fear,
    she left me alone and gave me tear,
    The relationship broke....that was never there:
    Now that she has gone breaking my heart
    i can do nothing but to pick those pieces gone apart
    and question myself Why my tears cant tuch ur heart..?

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      Beth37posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Aw, a love poem.. very sweet.
      Don't worry, you'll meet someone new and wonderful.
      When you do, treat her well. smile

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        Sandeep241posted 4 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks for apriciating my poem,