feedback on my poetry would be much appreciated

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    G A PHILLIPSposted 8 years ago

    I wrote many poems many years ago, but they were all very private. A rugby playing poet ! No wonder I kept it to myself .However I'm a little older now , and I hope a little wiser and a little more confident. Am I wasting my time? Would love to hear some feedback on Falling, good or bad. Thanks

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    Lucey Knightposted 8 years ago

    I read both your hubs and liked them.  I posted comments to each one.  Continue writing, you are doing very well.  Welcome to HubPages!