Would really appreciate your opinion on Noyade, one of my short stories. Brutal

  1. blueyez408 profile image60
    blueyez408posted 5 years ago

    Would really appreciate your opinion on Noyade, one of my short stories. Brutal and honest.

    Would really appreciate it. My email is bedlam408 (gmail). If possible. Thanks, regardless.

  2. Twilight Lawns profile image83
    Twilight Lawnsposted 5 years ago

    Honesty comes too easily to me, but also, I am a really kind hearted person (Don't tell anyone, I've kept it hidden for a very long time) so I will read your work,  but on the  understanding that if I find something  glaringly bad, that I will point it out.
    I doubt  if I will find anything glaringly bad, because I have had a taste of your work, as you know, and you have received my comments.
    One more thing.  I am an incredibly  slow reader and writer, so don;t expect any  results too soon.
    I am not writing myself right now, as I have a massive writers' block and HP doesn't do anything for me any more,
    Thanks for asking.
    Ian

 
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