It reminds me of one I wrote a few months back. I've been afraid to publish it. I am not knowledgeable about poetry in general. Thanks for having the courage to publish yours. I am learning quite a bit from each person I read. I don't know much, but I know I liked this!
Its wonderful! The Siren's song! Start publishing and keep going - you've got lots of company just waiting for your talent. I encourage you all to let yourselves loose and just let your soul breathe! Namaste'