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poetry

  1. dannyboy89 profile image55
    dannyboy89posted 7 years ago

    All because of you
    I awake each day with a smile
    and greet it with a laugh
    The world is a tresure to me
    because of you

    Every time I think of something sad
    I replace the thought with you!
    My mind is instantly changed and my heart is filled with gladness

    Every breath I take is meant for you
    I live this life surround in joy
    and I bathe in the promise of your love
    My soul belongs to you

    Each time I see something beautiful
    I want to take it and bring it to you
    My life has so much meaning now
    ALL BECAUSE OF YOU

  2. myownworld profile image80
    myownworldposted 7 years ago

    welcome here! Nice poem...make it into a hub and best of luck with writing! smile

  3. theirishobserver. profile image58
    theirishobserver.posted 7 years ago

    like it well done....

  4. Petra Vlah profile image60
    Petra Vlahposted 7 years ago

    So are we supposed to post poetry in this forum?
    They keep on saying that self promotion is not allowed so I am confused

  5. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 7 years ago

    No, this is a forum for *DISCUSSIONS* about poems and poetry big_smile but don't worry. smile is a common mistake with a lot of newbies so we just let them know n let it pass. wink n I agree, very nice poem!

 
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