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Who Brought Me to Be?

  1. Rafini profile image89
    Rafiniposted 7 years ago

    My past is my past

    Does it really matter

    It explains where I've been

    It tells me who I am

    Does it really matter

    To anyone but me

    Can anyone really see

    The me that brought me to be

    Or is it speculation

    Lies

    That brought me to be

    Does anyone really care

    Or is it an enemy in disguise

    Who brought me to be?

  2. tobey100 profile image60
    tobey100posted 7 years ago

    Wasn't me.  I was in Atlanta.

    1. Rafini profile image89
      Rafiniposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      And I wasn't.

      1. tobey100 profile image60
        tobey100posted 7 years agoin reply to this

        Nope, I didn't see ya.  I do like this poem (I'm calling it a poem, hope you don't mind)  It has a nice 'feel' to it.

        1. Rafini profile image89
          Rafiniposted 7 years agoin reply to this

          Don't mind a bit.

          Thanks,

          1. tobey100 profile image60
            tobey100posted 7 years agoin reply to this

            I've written music since I was 18.  Most lyrics now but, I've never been able to write a decent poem.  Must be a different thought process.

            1. Rafini profile image89
              Rafiniposted 7 years agoin reply to this

              Must be.  I didn't sit down and plan to write a poem, it just happened.  That's happened a lot to me lately...I started a screenplay, a young readers story, and other poems floating in my head that I haven't written down yet cuz their not finished.

              1. tobey100 profile image60
                tobey100posted 7 years agoin reply to this

                See, I can do that with music but not much else.  I have a hard time writing a letter.  God bless ya and your talent.

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    Justine76posted 7 years ago

    make this be your first hub. I would fan you so I could read it again. Threads eventually get buried, you should keep this!!

    1. tobey100 profile image60
      tobey100posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Ditto.  Lay some of this out for us Rafini.  I'd follow you to read more as well.

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    Justine76posted 7 years ago

    oh yeah....Welcome to HP.  smile

  5. Rafini profile image89
    Rafiniposted 7 years ago

    I'll do that  :-)

    I guess I wanted to try out the forums first.

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      Justine76posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      NOOOOOO dont let the forums suck you in...  lol  I fanned you anyway.

 
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