CLOUD DANCER [a week in the life of a comet] a poem by TONY MARTIN

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    you suggest oneposted 10 years ago

    Thunder in the sky,
    Even the moon shines brighter
    But noone knows why

    Faster than sound
    Yet visually still,
    No clouds to cover where you are bound
    Or to change your will.

    Behind you it trails
    Sparkling white
    The part we can see
    Such a wonderous sight.

    Yet darkness surrounds
    The light you show,
    The devastation you will cause
    Only you know.

    Silently you pass through the sky,
    Stirring up thoughts of
    Times and situations
    Which have passedus by.

    Harsh wind and cold rain
    Surround me tonight
    Bringing me comfort
    Instead of fright.

    When you return
    Another mind will seek the truth,
    Until then you will travel through this universe
    And remain so aloof.

    TONY MARTIN 29-03-1997

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      amandajolposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      That is an awesome poem!!!

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    getmybackposted 10 years ago

    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Thank You

    1. you suggest one profile image59
      you suggest oneposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      glad you like it, plenty more where that came from,not all the same though.

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    pinkyleeposted 10 years ago

    this is a great poem but may i suggest maybe saying the others for hubs? welcome to hubpages as well! ... with doing them in hubs you can add pictures to illustrate your poems.

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    sophsposted 10 years ago

    Awww that's lovely!!

    I agree with Pinky, you should definately make them into hubs! Great work! smile

  5. Beata Stasak profile image77
    Beata Stasakposted 10 years ago

    What a beautiful poem Tony, 'another mind is seeking truth' and is grateful to 'taste, smell, visualise and touch' your imaginative world.

    Thank you, I am very humble you like my writings, I have a lot to learn from you. All the best with your writing. Beata

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      you suggest oneposted 10 years agoin reply to this

      HI Beata,we should all learn something new each day and I suppose in a way we are all teachers,I just admire those who have the guts to stand in front of the world and do it,the poems I write are but a series of dreams and I have reams of them for you to read,if only I can figure out how to republish these hubs 9I was flagged unsuitable for some reason.Keep on enjoying life.

  6. Mentalist acer profile image60
    Mentalist acerposted 10 years ago

    A nice poem to meditate to, Thank you....

  7. kbulmer profile image59
    kbulmerposted 10 years ago

    great poem, reminds me of much of my poetry, very reflective and full of insight...bravo..more!


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