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The Eternal Aloneness

  1. ahorseback profile image62
    ahorsebackposted 7 years ago

    Once I had enough of people and
    all the aches and tears of society.
    I left this world and  began anew
    in a place with natures sobriety.
    Here in the mountains as old as time
    I found a life... one of brittle saneness.
    Staying well away from the footprints
    of others though I hold them blameless .
    It was I that did not join in.... never 
    to dance within the circles.
    Hoping against hope that in my
    alone world I would find the miracles.
    Now in the echoes of thunder I hear
    the crys of loved ones in my dreams.
    And wonder will there ever be peace
    in my soul by any means.
    Could I ever return to yesterday
    finding the will to chance.
    Without looking over my shoulder
    without again leaving the dance.
    For those living alone surely lose
    something in their heart and soul.
    The losses alone take away so much
    in the end such a heavy toll.

    1. t.cobbler profile image60
      t.cobblerposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I can relate

      1. ahorseback profile image62
        ahorsebackposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        thanks man....

    2. agaglia profile image80
      agagliaposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Is being alone safe? Perhaps each position - alone or together - has its consequence.

      1. ahorseback profile image62
        ahorsebackposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        you know you are right, thank you.

  2. Sab Oh profile image55
    Sab Ohposted 7 years ago

    You should hub your verse

    1. ahorseback profile image62
      ahorsebackposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I do , however , I just like writing....

 
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