Grounded Anyways - Aschool blues poem

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   sofsposted 13 years ago

   Grounded Anyways
   
   
   
   Every morning i'm thouroughly shaken,
   
   Screamed and yelled at,
   
   And rudely awakened.
   
   
   
   Pushed and prodded,
   
   i'm finally dressed,
   
   Tied and booted into the bus I'm thrust.
   
   
   
   On my back a heavy load,
   
   Staggering under the weight I plod,
   
   I just look nine decades old!!
   
   
   
   Into my class I finally walk,
   
   My teacher yells and ters me apart,
   
   Oh what a great start!!
   
   
   
   Wrong uniform..homework not done,
   
   she writes a note, with her red pen,
   
   My evening is ruined no more fun,
   
   I'm grounded again!!
   
   I know my mom!!!

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   bsscorpio8posted 13 years ago

   Damn sofs, what should I say? Sounds like me; circa 1979, except I was one decade and three years old.

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      sofsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Wow I finally found a person who actually read this and identified with himself   Thanx  bsscorpio

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   Pratonixposted 13 years ago

   Well done, sofs. You have to improve your spelling. But you have great poetic talent. Keep up the good work!

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      sofsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Pratonix I should say thank you very much,  for I found another one to read this.  Just ripped it off without a spell check the day I joined HP was too excited. Now I am down to earth.
      Its been lying there  unseen,  unread, unloved and unsung  for three weeks and then I wonder how bsscorpio dug this out .
      Have an awesome day!

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   UNLOVED ROHITposted 13 years ago

   never been grounded though just got lots of spanks in my life......... but nice poems any ways

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      sofsposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you unloved Rohit, I just wrote it for my sons poetry recital in school,
      I haven't been grounded too, but have seen many !!
      Thanx for looking this up. I just wrote one more would appreciate your comments on it.
      Have a great day!

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