Prey for Fire

  1. DeadBeatPoet profile image54
    DeadBeatPoetposted 6 years ago

    You are swimming around,

    in my swirling liquid head.

    First you splish then you splash,

    and then you turn my fire red.



    I just set my boat on fire,

    and lit my last flare.

    The moment that I saw you,

    I preyed my last prayer.



    I'm drifting in your inner beauty,

    you are my one last hope.

    Weave for me the length of your love,

    and from it braid me a rope.



    It doesn't matter you're in the distance,

    and off of my trajectory.

    I will swim with endless persistence,

    but only if you command me.

    

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    Brenda Durhamposted 6 years ago

    I love this poem!
    The third stanza is awesome!
    "Weave for me the length of your love
    and from it braid me a rope"---
    at once romantic, poetic, and realistic;  quite an accomplishment with words!

    By the way, do you mean "pray" instead of "prey"?

  3. mega1 profile image79
    mega1posted 6 years ago

    YES!  I command you!  Start swimming now!

 
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