morning glory

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   waynecaddigan@gooposted 14 years ago

   The sun shines down brightly as we all drag ourselves
   out of bed to get to work on time. Leaving our homes to go to
   work out on to the highways we all flock. Little cars and little
   vans all heading for another major traffic jam. Cars are all
   lined up bumper to bumper no one is making up any ground. Car horns finally start to blaze right in the middle of this crazy
   traffic maze. Each day reflects the next just who created this
   awful mess. People scream and people yell just who created this
   awful hell. You look to the left and then to the right. This is
   totally crazy we might as well give up this fight.

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      Writingissharingposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      WELL...OK!!!

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      Jaggedfrostposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Form wise I have found that poets here break ideas up on each line. It is a nice bit of pros though.  I think you should make this into a hub instead of placing it here.

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   Kim Lynnposted 14 years ago

   Too true! It's a great time to read, if the traffic isn't moving.
   Thanks!

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      Home Girlposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Just sell the car, dude!

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