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morning glory

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    waynecaddigan@gooposted 7 years ago

    The sun shines down brightly as we all drag ourselves
    out of bed to get to work on time. Leaving our homes to go to
    work out on to the highways we all flock. Little cars and little
    vans all heading for another major traffic jam. Cars are all
    lined up bumper to bumper no one is making up any ground. Car horns finally start to blaze right in the middle of this crazy
    traffic maze. Each day reflects the next just who created this
    awful mess. People scream and people yell just who created this
    awful hell. You look to the left and then to the right. This is
    totally crazy we might as well give up this fight.

    1. Writingissharing profile image59
      Writingissharingposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      WELL...OK!!!

    2. Jaggedfrost profile image81
      Jaggedfrostposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Form wise I have found that poets here break ideas up on each line. It is a nice bit of pros though.  I think you should make this into a hub instead of placing it here.

  2. Kim Lynn profile image61
    Kim Lynnposted 7 years ago

    Too true! It's a great time to read, if the traffic isn't moving.
    Thanks!

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      Home Girlposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Just sell the car, dude!

 
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