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  1. Desired Devinely profile image57
    Desired Devinelyposted 7 years ago

    laying on the bathroom floor
    with cuts feelin so sore
    a blade in my hand
    its time to take a stand
    im done with liers and im done with fakers
    filling drips opon my arm
    from the blades harm
    where do i lay
    where shall i rest
    layin with a knife
    for the rest off my life
    dont wonder y
    and please stopin all the sighing
    it my life that over
    dont b sad u wanted me gone anyway

    1. salt profile image74
      saltposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      a beautiful expression of pain.

      - if real,please get help from someone you trust. Self harm is
      a sign of pain that you find so strong that you wish to block it with other pain.

      (((((())))) it can also be psychic messages sent and you've picked up that pain. If it is the later, you mentally send the opposite message... why would i want to do that? You can work to create the positive. Life is not just black and white. There is a rainbow of experiences that colour it.

      1. Diane Inside profile image82
        Diane Insideposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        Hey salt, I saw your plea, I did report this as I don't know what else to do, Hope it is just a beautiful expression of pain , but feels like so much more.

        Desired Devinely, Hubpages is a great community, and we would love to see more of your work.  If you want to publish your work on the hubs for us all to see that would be fabulous.

        If there is more to this and you need help let us know. Please.

    2. Jaggedfrost profile image78
      Jaggedfrostposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      You might put some variety to your themes.  It will not engender you to always dwell on your darkness. As one with Bipolar and one who has acknowledged my need for the kindness and support of others, sometimes less is more when it comes to depressing your audience.

  2. rebekahELLE profile image89
    rebekahELLEposted 7 years ago
  3. Precious Pearl profile image79
    Precious Pearlposted 7 years ago

    I pray that you would know that you are valuable and that your life is worth living and it would be a great loss if you were not here.