Name this poem .....if you can?

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   ahorsebackposted 14 years ago

   I will find you.......I will you know
   no matter the night or day
   It all comes down gently in surprise
   That my dear is always the way
   
   It will come in microscopic touch
   one finger tangled in your hair
   Or perhaps the way the sun
   lays against pillows there
   
   But I will sneak into the smallest
   open crack within your breast
   And then what?.....It's all
   over ...love knows whats best
   
   Did you really think you would
   hide....stay so long inside
   That I wouldn't borrow your
   soul....take it along for a ride
   
   You may have a heart made of stone...
   a soul of iron....a mind of steel
   But I....I will turn them to liguid
   And your soul will begin to reel

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      perfectperceptionposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Call it "I will"!  It's definitely a poem about perseverance.  LOL

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   Jaggedfrostposted 14 years ago

   The problem with anyone giving it a name is that we cant see your heart enough to do the task justice.  A title is a teaser, a cypher, a way, an added clue that helps the readers focus on what is important, decode the meanings, or an added dimension to the mystery.

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      ahorsebackposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I was in a mood for teasing. This morning .

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   couturepopcafeposted 14 years ago

   So call it "Reel".

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      ahorsebackposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thats a good one!

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   sofsposted 14 years ago

   I'll go with Love Knows best!! beautiful.

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      ahorsebackposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks! I like that.

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   2uesdayposted 14 years ago

   Maybe  'I Will Find a Way.' 
   
   but you will know what best suits it,sometimes poetry gets
   re-named and even altered over time. Working titles often help you decide on the one you want eventually. I use them when the final title is for a time out of my grasp.
   
   
   
   or (this is an after thought)  - ' Love Will Find a Way.'

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   ralwusposted 14 years ago

   first four words of the first line; 'I Will Find You'

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   thirdmilleniumposted 14 years ago

   

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   know oneposted 14 years ago

   "Infiltration"
   
   That's my point of view on reading. ;-)

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   leni sandsposted 14 years ago

   I agree with 2uesdays and Ralwus - I think the best title would either be 'I will find you' or 'Love will find a way' or you could go for something not included in the actual poem - like 'Love will break you down', Reeling into love' or something like that!  Good poem by the way.

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    Greek Oneposted 14 years ago

    I think that the line "smallest open crack" taken from the 3rd stanza would get most Google search results if it was the title

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    saleheensblogposted 14 years ago

    "Evolution"

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    Poet625posted 14 years ago

    oh yes..i would go with i will find a way to your heart

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