Memories

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   tonks814posted 14 years ago

   Your face is like the vague memory of a bittersweet dream.
   A dream of a life I am sure I never lived.
   So foreign, your face looks to me now
   Like a familiar stranger
   Whose name I never caught.

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      Anachronyposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Brilliant, though I agree with frost. Bittersweet dream is a tad cliche. After reading the first line, I was like, "I know this!". But otherwise a great poem. Last line ended it well.
      
      Here's one for you, from me:
      
      title: Aged Distortion
      
      body:
      The guitar strings pluck away at the past.
      The drum beats bring the future to the mast.
      The chants bring the flame to it all.
      The words make the buildings fall.
      And throughout the music of all of this,
      The shore of your distortion is what I really miss.
      
      end:
      -Anachrony

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   Jaggedfrostposted 14 years ago

   Is this here because it is too short for tos?  It is a nice little poem, the first line of direct metaphor isn't necessary and could be shortened but the rest of it is thought provoking.

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      tonks814posted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I'm really new to hubpages, what's tos?
      And, thanks for the feedback, I am bad at proofreading my own work. I'll play with it a bit.

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   BIKTMIAposted 14 years ago

   Being on different levels of life is hard
   some people are so happy
   others are sadd
   some have so much
   others are so poor
   I remember them all
   and know what it means
   Memories , life it took a long time
   to comprehend that

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   BIKTMIAposted 14 years ago

   A crazy mind
   
   Why  I will always do something to you,
   When I suffered my stroke , and could not
   speak because of your life messes inflicting my life
   with your power not in my control
   on purpose is why I will always
   do something to your attacks on my life the now
   that should prove to you ,life was quiet until
   you came with your disrespect, why I will
   always do something to you, because your place
   was not , to be a factor in my life a somebody
   a nobody does not know.  Why I will always
   do something to what ever you do pertaining to
   me .  I have piece and have shown you what matters
   to me and that does not include you.  Why I will always
   do something to you when you come with dispair.

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   Jaggedfrostposted 14 years ago

   Adsense TOS refers to the nature of hubs that they consider mandatory to use it for adverting.  Hubpages uses those same standards give or take to judge the value of hubs in general once published.

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      Glenn Raymondposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Jaggedfrost,
      
      Thank you for that explanation, I've been curious.
      
      Tonks814, and Biktmia,
      
      Keep writing you have inner poets that want to be let out.  Mostly keep writing the content that sells.
      
      I remember the simple days when every piece of written work was typed up and snail mailed to the publisher.  I think this way is most handy and wonderful, but it is a lot to take in all at once.
      
      Cheers to you all.

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