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I will trade you for passion

  1. ahorseback profile image60
    ahorsebackposted 5 years ago

    I would give you a life of devotion
    a home in the golden sun
    If only this could last .....these passions
    even so simply.....one

    The  moans in the dark .....an hmmmms
    in the night
    Anything  to do with passion
    a perfect  lasting  kiss is alright

    Do you want my possessons
    my kingdom or my gold
    Show me the way to passionate kisses
    before I get to old

    Yet the years following the sweetest
    days all  our  passions wear thin
    I'd just as soon start over if I
    could go there again

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      Sarra Garrettposted 5 years agoin reply to this


    2. A Driveby Quipper profile image60
      A Driveby Quipperposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Too old for passionate kisses? May it never be!

      Although, a nice bowl of soup and hot bread are higher on my list.

  2. cleaner3 profile image78
    cleaner3posted 5 years ago

    great poem.

  3. LaThing profile image75
    LaThingposted 5 years ago

    Beautiful poem! Wondering why you posted it here instead of as a hub...... Well, passion for me, can't be sold. If it was for sale then the price is to be paid in mutual love, and desire!
    So much for kingdom and gold smile

  4. botipton profile image60
    botiptonposted 5 years ago

    beautiful poem once again.  Oh wise and wonderful purveyor of wisdom enlighten me to the advantages of posting poems here in forums instead of as a hub.  I await the arrival of the light you shed upon this question.

    1. LaThing profile image75
      LaThingposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      LOL... You said it better than I did! smile

  5. Gypsy Rose Lee profile image87
    Gypsy Rose Leeposted 5 years ago

    This is wonderful. lovely and perfectly romantic. I loved it. My answer:

    You're never too old for love
    And passion's another way
    To bring back all those
    Wonderful yesterdays