Will you give me your opinion on my writing style.

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    NuJazzposted 3 years ago

    Will you give me your opinion on my writing style.

    Would anyone be willing to read my Hubs and let me know what type of writer you think I would become. Hubs are: Inner Beauty to Outer Beauty; Left Home Alone By Spouse; Before You Tackle Know Your Defense; Courting vs. Dating and It's Time to Get Ready for That First Date.

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    peachpurpleposted 3 years ago

    i had just read your articles. My advice:
    1. Upload some of your own pictures.
    2. Addin polls
    3. Please break the words into paragraph and more spacing. 4 sentences in a paragraph, very hard to read crammy words.
    4. Please add in videos, related to the topic.
    5. You can add in link to each other since you have 4 posts

 
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