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The Joy of True Love (prose/poem)

Updated on August 22, 2011

the contentment of true love

Lying in your arms, my head against your shoulder,

l can hear your heartbeat.

You touch my hair and smooth it down

as you gently kiss my forehead.

And l can hear your heartbeat.

l hear the words ´l love yóu´

in your deep sonorous voice,

as you pull me closer to you so that

you too can hear MY heartbeat..

There is nowhere else l´d rather be

than where l am right now.

Tears well up into my eyes

with sentimental feelings.

The love within this room right now

could last for generations.....

O, love, my love, how blessed are we?

Some people never know this..

never feel the depth of love.. the passion that IS us.!

When we´re entwined l know l´m you

And you are me. We´re one.!

l never feel so safe and warm

as when we lie like this.

Never feel so precious

as when you gently touch my skin.

You touch my hair and whisper the words

l want to hear.

And l believe them., know you´re true

just as when l l tell you, you know that l am too.

we´re true.

Again l feel your heartbeat.

Don´t ever leave me, please not ever,

l´d be half a person then.

And you, you know l´ll never leave, not ever.

Together we are one

listening to each others heartbeats,.

l touch your chest    and let my fingers slide across your skn,

Then snuggle deep into your shoulder,

safe again.

Bliss.!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Oh acaetnna thank you for such a lovely comment.

    You really are the best with romantic poetry-...it makes your comment very special to me.

    I´m very happy that you loved it.

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    acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

    This is completely beautiful. I think that we are both so fortunate to have experienced true love and found our soul mates. Awesome, I loved it.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Hello Helen.

    Thank you for such a beautiful comment.

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    Helen 5 years ago

    It was awesome. Am in love with it

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    Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

    Oh toknowinfo., that was such a beautiful comment. Thank you so much.

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    toknowinfo 6 years ago

    This is beautiful. Your words evoke a sense of peace within you that radiate outward. You are a very talented writer.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you for reading, and leaving such a lovely comment. Take care.

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    Audrey Hunt 6 years ago from Nashville Tn.

    Bliss. What a beautiful word and feeling. Your lovely, enchanting poem was something I think we all want. I have had bits and peaces in my life and can relate this magnificent, intimate poem. Thank you for sharing your gift.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you , Tony. Always gives me a ´lift´ to see your face on my page take care.x

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    Tony McGregor 7 years ago from South Africa

    Ah! The bliss of love! What it is to be so loved indeed. The words are wonderfully evocative. Thanks for sharing

    Love and peace

    Tony

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you Deedee..... Your words are very kind. Take care. x

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thanks Epigramman. Glad you liked it.

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    Deborah S. Lawrence 7 years ago from Deborah's Musings

    May you always be blessed with such love and passion. It is not easy to put those feelings into words, but you did so beautifully.

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    epigramman 7 years ago

    ..back for more joy ...and more love .......

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    oooh. It makes me so happy that you liked it. Thank you.

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    SilverGenes 7 years ago

    Oh, Dim, this is beautiful! "The love within this room right now could last for generations..." I hope you know this kind of love every day of your life.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    What a lovely comment. Thank you.

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    Fehl Dungo 7 years ago from close to you...

    The blissful feeling of being in love and being loved. Beautifully written. So glad to see a friend of mine here is happy.. :) Bless ya, Dim.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thanks so much. My feelings were running deep when l wrote this and l felt it all over again.

    l´m so glad you liked it. You know how much l love your work.

    Take care x

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    DoorMattnomore 7 years ago

    I'm happy beyond words to see such a loving poem. I hope this is a recent moment. If not, I hope its one held close to get you thru the tough moments. Loved this...

    "l never feel so safe and warm

    as when we lie like this"

    that has to be one of the best feelings ever. :)

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    yor comment is a poem in itself. Thank you so much. Take care-

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    RunAbstract 7 years ago from USA

    Thank you so much for sharing these feelings of precious love! I am touched and joyful on your behalf! What a blessing you have with your beloved. It brings tears to my eyes that fairytales are alive and well in your heart and life. May you always live happily ever after with peace and contentment!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you brgt, l daren´t answer you in case my grandchildren read this page .....ha ha .. God bless

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    bayareagreatthing 7 years ago from Bay Area California

    I hope this described a recent moment in your life and not a long distant memory. So beautiful my friend.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you , Jess. Great to see you on my page. It´s the colours, you.Cartoon people are always brighter and look more joyful than us lowly humans. Take care

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    Jess Killmenow 7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

    Lovely and warm, these feelings of safety and security, love, composed so well in your poetry.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you so much.High praise comimg from you, who write so beautifully.

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    epigramman 7 years ago

    ...and I'm safe again .... I'm at this hub and being moved by your tender, life-affirming words ......

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    Hee Hee,,,,... Thanks Micky. Not normally my style. Don´t know what came over me. Must have taken a ´memory pill´from my youth. Take care of yourself,.

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Gee Dim! Gee! Oh me! This is so beautiful but it's time for my cold shower. Buttons up! Not you or your hubby - I'm just pushing your buttons. On the HUB HERE! Gee! Is there a baseball game today?

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    Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

    PHEW! Glad you liked it. l don´t often put such intimacy ´´out there´´... makes me nervous. Thank you for giving me some confidence.

    It´s never too late to find the love of you life. l hope yours is just around the corner. God bless. xxx

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    singlmomat52 7 years ago

    Oh Dim this is so beautiful, it made me cry. I have never had this, but I have come close and it does feel wonderful. Thank you for sharing such a precious poem of love and closeness. God bless!!!

    xxxxxxx