Would appreciate any feedback

  1. mperrottet profile image95
    mperrottetposted 5 years ago

    I would appreciate any feedback on my two latest hubs concerning my style, format and choice of subject. I haven't written many hubs yet, and would like some feedback from you more experienced hubbers so that I can improve and build up an audience - thanks!

    http://mperrottet.hubpages.com/hub/Know … hink-Tanks
    http://mperrottet.hubpages.com/hub/Why- … In-The-USA

    1. angela_michelle profile image89
      angela_michelleposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Great topics, great layouts, great grammar. Overall good job! THe one thing about the think tank article is that you said, everyone has heard of a think tank. I hate to tell you, but I had not. Also in the first paragraph you capitalized Think Tank once, but did not the other time. I'm not sure if it should be capitalized at the beginning, but you should be consistent either way. No critiques on the health care one; great topic, great layout, great grammar, and (I agree...)

      1. mperrottet profile image95
        mperrottetposted 5 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks so much for the feedback Angela - I really appreciate it, and I'll make changes to the think tank article accordingly.

 
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