I'd like feedback on my article: What To Do when You have Difficulty Falling to.

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   Arc4lifeposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article What To Do when You have Difficulty Falling to Sleep. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      Natalie Frankposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      This is an important topic but there are a zillion articles out there that say much the same thing.  Add something that is original and that other articles don't have such as a personal reflection or story etc.  Also, right now the article looks like it is a publication for the pillow you are trying to sell.  The link goes directly to another one of your articles that is another glorified ad to sell these pillows. As long as the article looks like spam it will not be accepted. Follow Alicia's advice and take out ads and self promotional elements.

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   AliciaCposted 7 years ago

   You have some good suggestions, but I don't expect your article will be approved while it's promoting your website and is trying to sell one of your pillows. I think you'll need to remove the self-promotional elements in order to get the article accepted.

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   Gregory DeVictorposted 7 years ago

   In addition to Alicia’s comments, you’re going to have to read this article that discusses the proper capitalization of titles and headings:
   
   https://owlcation.com/humanities/Rules- … an-Article

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      Arc4lifeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      hey Gregory, can you give me an example of where I did incorrectly. Thanks

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         Gregory DeVictorposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Hello Matthew:
         
         Here is the title as it appears in your article:
         
         “What To Do when You have Difficulty Falling to Sleep?”
         
         It should be written as:
         
         What to Do When You Have Difficulty Falling to Sleep?
         
         The preposition “to” does not have to be capitalized.
         
         The word “when” must be capitalized.
         
         The word “have” must be capitalized.
         
         Perhaps you should also replace the words “to Sleep” with the word “Asleep.”
         
         What do you think?
         
         I hope that this helps. Let me know if I can help you any further.

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            Gregory DeVictorposted 7 years agoin reply to this

            I forgot to tell you that you do not need the question mark in your title.
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               Arc4lifeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

               Greg, I don't know what i was thinking when i wrote this title. It actually did not make sense. I fixed it. Thank you so much for pointing this out.

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            Arc4lifeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

            Greg, I thought that from the article it stated that words like "to" should not be capitalized. Perhaps I am wrong.

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               Arc4lifeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

               Got it.

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               Gregory DeVictorposted 7 years agoin reply to this

               Matthew, as I stated above:
               
               The preposition “to” does not have to be capitalized.

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                  Arc4lifeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

                  Got it. Thanks

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   Arc4lifeposted 7 years ago

   okay Thank you all.

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      Arc4lifeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Hey everyone...Alicia and Natalie. I took your points very seriously and fixed up the article. Please see what you think.
      https://hubpages.com/health/Top-10-Ways … p-Possible

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