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My 14th hub

  1. LondonGirl profile image91
    LondonGirlposted 7 years ago

    I'd be grateful for some feedback. And I don't mind criticism, please feel free.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/The-sinking-of- … vors-story

    1. Sufidreamer profile image80
      Sufidreamerposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Nice Hub, London Girl (congrats on reaching 100 fans!). A wonderful piece of family history.

      The only thing that I can see is that some of the pictures are a little small and difficult to see. Apart from that, very interesting and very well laid out. smile

  2. Rochelle Frank profile image90
    Rochelle Frankposted 7 years ago

    I enjoyed your story very much.. can't offer  suggestions for improvement, but did see a minor typo;
    "the Admiralty decided not to requisition Lusitania as she was too big, needed too bigger crew,"
    (OK- You asked for it.)

  3. Dame Scribe profile image61
    Dame Scribeposted 7 years ago

    Awesome story! and ...I think the word is ....stricken ... not striken ? I am Canadian and we do spell strange too, lol

  4. LondonGirl profile image91
    LondonGirlposted 7 years ago

    Thanks all - and I welcome the corrections, it's always better to get spelling etc right.