I'd be grateful for some feedback. And I don't mind criticism, please feel free.
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Nice Hub, London Girl (congrats on reaching 100 fans!). A wonderful piece of family history.
The only thing that I can see is that some of the pictures are a little small and difficult to see. Apart from that, very interesting and very well laid out.
I enjoyed your story very much.. can't offer suggestions for improvement, but did see a minor typo;
"the Admiralty decided not to requisition Lusitania as she was too big, needed too bigger crew,"
(OK- You asked for it.)
Awesome story! and ...I think the word is ....stricken ... not striken ? I am Canadian and we do spell strange too, lol
Thanks all - and I welcome the corrections, it's always better to get spelling etc right.
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