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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Best Online Dating Sites List For You Dude

  1. Havivi profile image61
    Haviviposted 23 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Best Online Dating Sites List For You Dude. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. colorfulone profile image85
      colorfuloneposted 23 months ago in reply to this

      I take it that English is not your first language?  Maybe you do not know that you can not go to those sites and take images and use them elsewhere on the internet?

      1. Havivi profile image61
        Haviviposted 23 months ago in reply to this

        thanks for your feedback, I've revised it ^_^

        1. colorfulone profile image85
          colorfuloneposted 23 months ago in reply to this

          Um...what did you revise?

          1. Havivi profile image61
            Haviviposted 23 months ago in reply to this

            remove img source link, so it's not counted as spammy anymore, Did I do the right thing ?

  2. Paul Maplesden profile image90
    Paul Maplesdenposted 23 months ago

    Havivi, thanks for requesting feedback, having taken a look at your hub, please do take this feedback constructively:

    - I do not believe that English is your first language as there are a number of errors in your sentence structure, spelling, word choice and punctuation
    - Your introduction is not clear and straightforward enough and does not make a clear point as to what the rest of your hub will provide to the reader
    - The review of each of the dating sites is very short and although you do provide information on the sites, it is not clear

    I would recommend the following:

    - As Hubpages requires a high quality of English writing, you may want to improve your English use elsewhere. Unfortunately, until your standard of English improves significantly, it is unlikely that you will pass the QAP process and subsequently your hubs will not be featured on the site
    - Once you have achieved this, you can then address the other issues with your hub

    I hope that this is helpful to you.

    1. Havivi profile image61
      Haviviposted 23 months ago in reply to this

      Yes, I'm, thank you so much for your feedback, wish me luck on my hubpost camp

 
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