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I'd like feedback on my Hub: 52 Blocks The Art Of Defence

  1. Dink 52 profile image60
    Dink 52posted 18 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 52 Blocks The Art Of Defence (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. relache profile image88
    relacheposted 18 months ago
    1. M Asif Jameel profile image32
      M Asif Jameelposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      As Nicole mentioned, your hub seems overly promotional

  3. Nicole Grizzle profile image93
    Nicole Grizzleposted 18 months ago

    Your hub lacks organization and has fairly poor grammar consistently throughout the text. These things can be fixed.
    But, your hub is very promotional. Overly so. It's borderline spammy at times. It makes no sense. This makes sense when, upon a quick Google check, the parts that are in grammatically-correct English are copied-and-pasted from various websites. I'd scrap the whole thing.
    Why? It's pretty obvious very little effort went into making this hub provide any value to anyone. It's purpose is to sell. Hubpages is not the platform for you to do this.