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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Marriage make ups through break-ups

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    Kaye Pee 8cheposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Marriage make ups through break-ups (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. NateB11 profile image93
      NateB11posted 2 years ago in reply to this

      I think it could potentially be a good Hub but it needs more detail and content and needs to be broken down into sections that go into those details. More detail on why relationships start disintegrating (and/or what kept them or keeps them together); for example, too many demands, domineering personalities, etc. It's okay to be personal, but people reading a web article need a take-away from it.

  2. sockii profile image86
    sockiiposted 2 years ago

    Your hub is very short on text and quite honestly I'm not getting what your overall message/point is. The title "Marriage make ups through break-ups", suggests it is somehow about rebuilding a marriage after a break up. But then I don't see any actual follow up on giving advice, just quite honestly what reads like a bit of a rant against your ex (and women in general).

  3. relache profile image85
    relacheposted 2 years ago

    This site wants written articles with magazine-like length and quality.  This is not a blog site.

 
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