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I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Ultimate Guide for Improve Memory

  1. shankhapushpi profile image60
    shankhapushpiposted 21 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Ultimate Guide for Improve Memory (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. sockii profile image85
    sockiiposted 21 months ago

    Hub reads like badly spun content and/or badly in need of English grammar assistance and proofreading. Even the hub title has a grammatical error.

  3. FatFreddysCat profile image94
    FatFreddysCatposted 21 months ago

    What sockii said. The English used is ...errr... sub-par at best.

  4. Fahsionboots profile image71
    Fahsionbootsposted 21 months ago

    interesting hub,
    did you know that RED onions, fish improve memory also...and taste yummy.
    yes, the first line should say, The brain.. and Year to Year (the second 'y' should be lower case...like the other have said get a native English speaker to proofread it, if English is not your first language.in any case get a trusted friend to read it as its quite long (which long hubs are good to get featured)for us here.

    Try inserting a poll half way down or nearer the bottom, or  even a quiz is fun, grab a video from you tube, fix up the grammar errors and it will be featured I believe.