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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Premonitions between misconceptions and acceptance

  1. Irina Ivan profile image60
    Irina Ivanposted 18 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Premonitions between misconceptions and acceptance (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Oztinato profile image81
      Oztinatoposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      The title lets you down badly as it is confusingly worded. It is sort of an annoying title that does nothing to entice others to continue. It hints at more confusing grammar to follow.
      What about "Scientifically Proven Premonitions".
      Other than a few minor spelling and grammar errors I can't see any other major issues.

      1. Irina Ivan profile image60
        Irina Ivanposted 18 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks Oztinato. I will review based on your feedback.

    2. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 18 months ago in reply to this

      I agree with Oztinato, change the title to reflect the hub topic.

      It's quite well written. There are few little nuances of language that could be corrected, for example, "We have often heard of animals having odd behaviours before dangerous situations..."

      Animals don't 'have' odd behaviour but they might display it. Also you can get rid of many instances of the verb 'to be' (have/having).

      We often hear of animals displaying odd behaviour before dangerous events..."

      Clipping out those extraneous words tightens up the writing. Having said that, your style is your style and it shouldn't make any difference to QAP as long as the grammar is mostly okay.

      Try removing the Amazon capsule, see if the hub is approved and then add it back in, preferably further up the hub where it is supported by related information. You can move the capsule to the right and the text will wrap around it.

      Good luck.

      1. Irina Ivan profile image60
        Irina Ivanposted 18 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks a lot, guys. I reviewed based on your comments and resubmitted. Hope it's ok now.

  2. Jesse Drzal profile image86
    Jesse Drzalposted 18 months ago

    Good luck, Irina

 
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