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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Advice and Nature

  1. Ae Clane profile image60
    Ae Claneposted 13 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Advice and Nature. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. galleryofgrace profile image83
      galleryofgraceposted 13 months ago in reply to this

      Your hub is unreadable garbage and will never be allowed.

      1. FatFreddysCat profile image94
        FatFreddysCatposted 12 months ago in reply to this

        Ouch. galleryofgrace with a cinderblock for the win! CRRRRUNCH!

    2. greenmind profile image89
      greenmindposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      Poetry, like all art, is meant to draw out a response. So actually it's this poem for the WIN.
      I suggest people read some Gertrude Stein, maybe "Tender Buttons," to see where the OP is coming from. It's not supposed to make you comfy and go down easy like 99.9999% of the "poetry" on HP. Just sayin'

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 13 months ago

    I don't know why I bother, but you've inflicted numerous pieces of simply dreadful writing on us over the last few days. You have been given advice and coaching that you ignore. Is your purpose simply to annoy folks like ?

  3. profile image60
    duggalposted 12 months ago

    Ae,
    To begin with your hub does have some potential.
    Yes, it is currently not up to the mark but it can!
    First of all, it seems as if you were trying to increase the word count.
    Having more words in your hub is not to make you stuff your hub with words. It is just to ensure that you have content rich hubs.
    for example, qouting from your hub you have written "People, sometimes, are conscious. People, sometimes, are delirious.
    They are not constantly conscious. They are not constantly delirious."
    Just work on this aspect and let me know. I would be glad to read your hub well written.
    Hope I gave you some worthy feedback.

  4. Ae Clane profile image60
    Ae Claneposted 12 months ago

    Thank you for the reply, duggal.

 
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