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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Gang Related

  1. IWriteyouRead profile image81
    IWriteyouReadposted 11 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Gang Related. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    Should I change the form and picture?

    1. jackclee lm profile image75
      jackclee lmposted 11 months ago in reply to this

      You are 80 percent there. All you need is to add 2 more related images and to breakup your text into 3 modules instead of one. Introduction, Body and Conclusion. It also helps to break up into smaller paragraphs which make it easier to read.

  2. aasl profile image81
    aaslposted 11 months ago

    It actually seems alright. I've seen some PRETTY bad ones before and still manage to get posted. I don't think the program understand poetry, which is what it seems. I like it.

    It might be pretty cool to have a video of you reading it so the audience can hear the emphasis you put on different words that can't  be easily read on a screen.

    Check out my page if you like what you see follow me! I'll do the same for you.

  3. IWriteyouRead profile image81
    IWriteyouReadposted 11 months ago

    Thank you I will use all of this advice. I truly appreciate it!

 
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