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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Gang Related

  1. IWriteyouRead profile image80
    IWriteyouReadposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Gang Related. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    Should I change the form and picture?

    1. jackclee lm profile image79
      jackclee lmposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      You are 80 percent there. All you need is to add 2 more related images and to breakup your text into 3 modules instead of one. Introduction, Body and Conclusion. It also helps to break up into smaller paragraphs which make it easier to read.

  2. aasl profile image83
    aaslposted 2 months ago

    It actually seems alright. I've seen some PRETTY bad ones before and still manage to get posted. I don't think the program understand poetry, which is what it seems. I like it.

    It might be pretty cool to have a video of you reading it so the audience can hear the emphasis you put on different words that can't  be easily read on a screen.

    Check out my page if you like what you see follow me! I'll do the same for you.

  3. IWriteyouRead profile image80
    IWriteyouReadposted 2 months ago

    Thank you I will use all of this advice. I truly appreciate it!

 
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